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(someone's hurting)
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(someone's hurting) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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(someone's hurting) I can't forget (someone's crying) and I regret knowing pain of swollen eyes too many tears too many lies (someone's pain) in compromise... Where is the gain? What is the prize? Why awaken dog that lies? Allow her sleep this night in peace. Allow her, please, her dignity... she has earned the right to cry. (someone's hurting) No one's surprised. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sleep deprivation works too  , this is awesome Seren! Your heart is beautiful especially when it's reaching to a friend. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
she has earned the right to cry. A very touching poem, serenity.  ....chanson~~"Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
POWERFUL WORK... regards O serene One, Sudhir |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
serenity, I found this intriguing, sad and so full of care and concern. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
serenity, I like this one. Good heart you have kind lady. Very good read & message. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
amazing, so often we all need a good cry seems like it cleanses us where we can start anew. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all...I appreciate your reading and kind comments as always...just thought it important to remember that sometimes our opinions are not as important as people's feelings...so that being said, this is all that I will say: I care. That's all. End of discussion for me. Love to ALL. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was very touching. And THANK YOU......we all earn the right to cry. Our bodies need to realese....Sweet words. Peoples feelings are so very important, especially other's. Jenn E |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I liked your form here, very nicely writen and powerful LIz |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Serenity this is just beautiful. You have touched me deeply with this poem. Thank you very for sharing. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
very powerful indeed and very heartfelt. Beautiful. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes and it's me...but I will be alright...everybody hurts sometime...crying is very necessary...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it a lot!!!!!!!!!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A great read and thanyou for sharing. Coco |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Wow.. this is a powerful piece, and beautifully written. I enjoyed it much! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
I am very pleased with the direction you have taken with your writing. Seem to have opened up more great poem Rich (((SEREN))) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
A very big WOW !!! This is so beautiful....(sigh) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I liked the poem and LOVED the comment. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Careful! I don't care that you care about caring! Hi, S'en. I loved the gentle touch of this poem. And I'm sure Butterfly Slippers appreciates it.Mike |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
What a beautiful and thoughtful poem! Wouldn't it be nice if we were so aware of another's pain? Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks all...heart all toasty and warm again...smiles. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
serenity~ This, my dear, is a work of art. You have touched me deeply with this. Very powerful and compassionate poem, my dear. ( And I am glad your heart is all warm and toasty again, too!) Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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