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the romantic fanatic Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 26Spokane, WA U.S.A. 
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Whining it's high-pitched squeal, (caused by rusted cogs and clockwork) My mind reveals a thought, Soon (as the sound nears deafening), An idea appears, Radiating with it's own energy, Working it's way through my brain, It illuminates upon others... plans...goals...dreams... Have these been locked away from me? How were they so cleverly hidden, Within my own mind even? It seems as though my worst enemy is me. D-mon |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Within my own mind even? It seems as though my worst enemy is me Yes.....and the hardest one to be protected from. Powerful thoughts and you give reason to pause and think...I enjoy poetry that does that...so thank you! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Your thoughts are so unique! Hardly rusty, but I know what you mean! hehe This was very interesting - I too, struggle with all the ideas and dreams within my head. Maybe that's why I could relate so well to this piece. Once again, so much said in so few lines...(Shoot a little W-D40 in your ear, it might help!)  It amazes me how you get so much across in such short writings! Bravo! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I enjoyed this... a very creative expression of enlightenment. Do keep writing  ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
aLLo TRF I like the style of writing you have and I look forward to many more readings! Great poem Coco |
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Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
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