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Gently Opened.................
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Gently Opened................. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Once lay lifeless, covered with earth darkened to the beauty above until love arrived, it's purness soaked through opened up like wings of a dove In this embrace, pierced to the light "green ray" of loves shine everywhere giving the strength, helping to grow now standing firm, warm in it's glare gently opened, giving all, revealing this beautiful flower...... Without you, "My Love" I can not survive, your love holds all of the power. Jenn E |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
You did a wonderful job with this one. I especially like... "until love arrived, it's purness soaked through opened up like wings of a dove" -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
this is so very sweet and innocent... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is so lovely girl. Its tender sweetness is so beautiful and captures ones heart from the start. Loved it. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Jenn E.... You are truly a beautiful flower, and this poem shows that beauty that lies in your soul!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a wonderful vision this is. Well done, Jenn  |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Jaimie* Thank you so very much for reading this. Paula* Your replies are always welcome here! Mark* I say Thanks Boy! Your replies always make me smile. Sunny1* You flatter me to death, THANK YOU. Your caring words and replies mean so much to me. HUGS to you...... Eloise* Thank You kindly and a vision is what "he" is. Warm Smiles. |
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