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Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

0 posted 2000-08-30 01:36 AM


Once lay lifeless, covered with earth
darkened to the beauty above
until love arrived, it's purness soaked through
opened up like wings of a dove

In this embrace, pierced to the light
"green ray" of loves shine everywhere
giving the strength, helping to grow
now standing firm, warm in it's glare

gently opened, giving all, revealing this beautiful flower......
Without you, "My Love" I can not survive, your love holds all of the power.

Jenn E


© Copyright 2000 Jenn E - All Rights Reserved
ladysixstring
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 374

1 posted 2000-08-30 12:55 PM


You did a wonderful job with this one.  I especially like... "until love arrived, it's purness soaked through opened up like wings of a dove"

-jaimie

Website: www.ladysixstring.com

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2000-08-30 02:02 PM


this is so very sweet and innocent...
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-08-30 02:09 PM


This is so lovely girl.  Its tender sweetness is so beautiful and captures ones heart from the start.  Loved it.

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-30-2000).]

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
4 posted 2000-08-30 03:13 PM


Jenn E....

           You are truly a beautiful flower, and this poem shows that beauty that lies in your soul!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Eloise
Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
5 posted 2000-08-30 03:16 PM


What a wonderful vision this
is.  Well done, Jenn  

Jenn E
Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
6 posted 2000-08-30 08:46 PM


Jaimie*  Thank you so very much for reading this.  

Paula*  Your replies are always welcome here!  

Mark* I say Thanks Boy! Your replies always make me smile.    

Sunny1* You flatter me to death, THANK YOU. Your caring words and replies mean so much to me. HUGS to you......  

Eloise* Thank You kindly and a vision is what "he" is.  

Warm Smiles.

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