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j_csgirl
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0 posted 2000-08-29 11:47 PM



As I gaze up at this incredible man who's making
> love to me.. all I can think about is, how did I get this lucky? Where did this dream come from?  How did I get here, to this place? This lovely, warm, safe place?
>
> The man who at one moment.. is tender to the point
> of painful.. timid... but fire burns in his eyes.
>
> Then.. he changes before my eyes and wraps me into
> his arms.. forceful, wildly.. but always.. with
> underlying gentlessness that can't be described.
>
> He smiles.. but trys to stop himself, lest I might
> get a glimpse of the happiness he tries not to show.
>
> Other times, he looks deeply in my eyes, like he
> sees the world there and I can't look away, the eyes are locked.. even more than the flesh.
>
> He strokes my hair, as gentle as if touching the
> pedal of a flower.. then kisses me with the strength and passion of the most ardent lover in the most romantic
> poetry ever written.
>
> Strong, gentle, sweet, kind and love has now
> revealed itself to me.... through his touch.
>
.............for the person.. and he knows who he is.. (smile)

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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-08-29 11:51 PM


Awwwwwweeeee......sweetie.....thank you so very much for posting this piece ...... it is for me i hope  
j_csgirl
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2 posted 2000-08-29 11:53 PM


Yes, dear.. it's for you.. as always.
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3 posted 2000-08-29 11:55 PM


YIPEEEEEEEE

(dancing a jig) WOOHOOOOOOOOOO

Godd, this is so lovely  

j_csgirl
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4 posted 2000-08-29 11:55 PM


umm... are you sure I should have posted this here?? (blush)
Jenn E
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5 posted 2000-08-30 12:51 PM


Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww, you guys are so sweet! I am so HAPPY!!!! I can't stop grinning, although I feel like I am interrupting. LOL  Sorry, next time I will knock!!!  (giggles)

Jenn E

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6 posted 2000-08-30 06:21 PM


I am so very happy that you posted this here

             


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J_C'sgirl~ First, Welcome!   This is sooooooo sweet!! I just love it.   That's how I feel about my hubby. Guess we're lucky!   I'm glad you posted it here, I enjoyed reading it.   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2000-08-30 06:31 PM


Knock knock....I learn from others mistakes LOL...easier that way.  Very  sweet post.  Welcome to Passions and I assume you will be staying and didnt just come here to give Jeffrey ONE day of sunshine.  Lovely write and so touching to see.
JulieAnn
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9 posted 2000-08-30 06:31 PM


Welcome to passions.....this is very tender...and sweet....love in it's awakening....thanks for letting us all share in your happiness....

Julie :)



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10 posted 2000-08-31 08:06 AM


Hi darling......goddddddd......the movies are still playing in my head.....(on knees with roses in hand).....Marry me sweetheart.....see I told you I'm not giving up  
sonjes
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11 posted 2000-08-31 11:49 AM


Very sensual piece...and Welcome to Passions...
  hasn't been moved yet, so perhaps its safe.  
  Looking forward to more of your writing.

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma


j_csgirl
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12 posted 2000-08-31 07:13 PM


Can I answer in person?? (smile)


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13 posted 2000-08-31 07:14 PM


And thank you all for the warm welcome... Jeffrey says you are all very kind and I can see why you all love him so much.. (smile)

I know the feeling... trust me.


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14 posted 2000-08-31 08:08 PM


Sweetheart,

In person? Oh yeah.....but until then expect to hear this question every day  

Do you really know just how much I love you?

Sometimes I wake up
in the middle of the night
shivering from fright feeling
empty feeling nothing because
I think about how it would be if
you weren't here And then I
wonder if you really know
how very much you mean to
me how incredible I think you
are how you are a part of all my
emotions how you are the
deepest meaning in my life
Please always know that I
love you more than anything
else in the world
      
I didn't write this and can't remember who did but it describes exactly how I feel  

All my love,
Jeffrey

Marina
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15 posted 2000-08-31 11:28 PM


This is wonderful!!!  I am so very happy for both of you!!!!  I wish you all the best!!

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



Diane Yvonne
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16 posted 2000-09-01 06:29 AM


Sounds like a beautiful Love Story going
on here, After you answer in person, be sure
to answer here, LOL, I'm sure everyone is
waiting.

Hugs
Diane

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17 posted 2000-09-01 04:08 PM


Goddddd.....I just can't keep myself from coming back and reading these.....these.....these......godddddd.....I do so love you, more than any words could ever say. Without you I am nothing. Thank you for giving me a reason to believe in love again....but most of all thank you for allowing me to love you.

All my love,
Jeffrey

Kethry
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18 posted 2000-09-01 05:13 PM


Knock, Knock, Can I enter this conversation?   Enough of this mushy stuff."Marry him already" - so you can down to the serious business of writing more beautiful poems.  

Welcome to passions.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

j_csgirl
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19 posted 2000-09-01 06:18 PM


Jeffrey, you were very much "something" before we met, believe me.

I've been here with you all along  


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20 posted 2000-09-01 07:08 PM


Sweetheart......You totally amaze me every day in every way......I love you
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21 posted 2000-09-01 07:31 PM




Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh Jeffery and J_csgirl you are both so sweet and perfect together!  

And J_csgirl this is beautifully written with honesty and passion, I loved it and Welcome To Passions!!!!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly


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22 posted 2000-09-08 12:46 PM


I love you with all that I am I love you

((((HUGGGGGGGGGGGGG))))

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