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passions.. in real life |
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j_csgirl Junior Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 10 |
As I gaze up at this incredible man who's making > love to me.. all I can think about is, how did I get this lucky? Where did this dream come from? How did I get here, to this place? This lovely, warm, safe place? > > The man who at one moment.. is tender to the point > of painful.. timid... but fire burns in his eyes. > > Then.. he changes before my eyes and wraps me into > his arms.. forceful, wildly.. but always.. with > underlying gentlessness that can't be described. > > He smiles.. but trys to stop himself, lest I might > get a glimpse of the happiness he tries not to show. > > Other times, he looks deeply in my eyes, like he > sees the world there and I can't look away, the eyes are locked.. even more than the flesh. > > He strokes my hair, as gentle as if touching the > pedal of a flower.. then kisses me with the strength and passion of the most ardent lover in the most romantic > poetry ever written. > > Strong, gentle, sweet, kind and love has now > revealed itself to me.... through his touch. > .............for the person.. and he knows who he is.. (smile) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Awwwwwweeeee......sweetie.....thank you so very much for posting this piece ...... it is for me i hope  |
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j_csgirl Junior Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 10 |
Yes, dear.. it's for you.. as always. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
YIPEEEEEEEE (dancing a jig) WOOHOOOOOOOOOO Godd, this is so lovely  |
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j_csgirl Junior Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 10 |
umm... are you sure I should have posted this here?? (blush) |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww, you guys are so sweet! I am so HAPPY!!!! I can't stop grinning, although I feel like I am interrupting. LOL Sorry, next time I will knock!!! (giggles) Jenn E |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I am so very happy that you posted this here |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
J_C'sgirl~ First, Welcome!  This is sooooooo sweet!! I just love it. That's how I feel about my hubby. Guess we're lucky! I'm glad you posted it here, I enjoyed reading it. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Knock knock....I learn from others mistakes LOL...easier that way. Very sweet post. Welcome to Passions and I assume you will be staying and didnt just come here to give Jeffrey ONE day of sunshine. Lovely write and so touching to see. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Welcome to passions.....this is very tender...and sweet....love in it's awakening....thanks for letting us all share in your happiness.... Julie :) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Hi darling......goddddddd......the movies are still playing in my head.....(on knees with roses in hand).....Marry me sweetheart.....see I told you I'm not giving up  |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Very sensual piece...and Welcome to Passions... hasn't been moved yet, so perhaps its safe. Looking forward to more of your writing. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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j_csgirl Junior Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 10 |
Can I answer in person?? (smile) |
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j_csgirl Junior Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 10 |
And thank you all for the warm welcome... Jeffrey says you are all very kind and I can see why you all love him so much.. (smile) I know the feeling... trust me. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Sweetheart, In person? Oh yeah.....but until then expect to hear this question every day Do you really know just how much I love you? Sometimes I wake up in the middle of the night shivering from fright feeling empty feeling nothing because I think about how it would be if you weren't here And then I wonder if you really know how very much you mean to me how incredible I think you are how you are a part of all my emotions how you are the deepest meaning in my life Please always know that I love you more than anything else in the world I didn't write this and can't remember who did but it describes exactly how I feel All my love, Jeffrey |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is wonderful!!! I am so very happy for both of you!!!! I wish you all the best!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Diane Yvonne Junior Member
since 2000-08-22
Posts 36Camdenton,Mo. USA |
Sounds like a beautiful Love Story going on here, After you answer in person, be sure to answer here, LOL, I'm sure everyone is waiting. Hugs Diane |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Goddddd.....I just can't keep myself from coming back and reading these.....these.....these......godddddd.....I do so love you, more than any words could ever say. Without you I am nothing. Thank you for giving me a reason to believe in love again....but most of all thank you for allowing me to love you. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Knock, Knock, Can I enter this conversation?  Enough of this mushy stuff."Marry him already" - so you can down to the serious business of writing more beautiful poems. Welcome to passions. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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j_csgirl Junior Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 10 |
Jeffrey, you were very much "something" before we met, believe me. I've been here with you all along |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Sweetheart......You totally amaze me every day in every way......I love you |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh Jeffery and J_csgirl you are both so sweet and perfect together! And J_csgirl this is beautifully written with honesty and passion, I loved it and Welcome To Passions!!!! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I love you with all that I am I love you ((((HUGGGGGGGGGGGGG)))) |
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