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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Consumed by thoughts Of utter loss My mind is froze Refrained, untaught. Passed over by My frame of mind I have no view I see no lines This writer’s block Encompassed me Blurs my view No passion seen So stroke me light Feel not the strain Of wanting more No thought contained. Just keep in mind My heart does bleed I do not wait I must concede That life goes on No give or take This life we live Is what we make. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahh my friend,I feel your pain... it is such a drag when we get hit with a dose of block...my muse stays mad at me but this is an awesome poem sir... "This writer’s block Encompassed me Blurs my view No passion seen So stroke me light Feel not the strain Of wanting more No thought contained. Just keep in mind My heart does bleed I do not wait I must concede That life goes on No give or take This life we live Is what we make. ========================= very cool verses..and much wisdom in the last one. take care jm "looking all around the room, I see the clutter and the gloom, Im not only black...Im not only numb... ~gin blossoms~ There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you JM Hard sometimes to overcome the blocks emotions can bring. Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Who's your buddy? I AM...if ya need to talk, I've got an ear...(((((you))))) |
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