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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-08-28 10:24 PM


When He Sang
{Thank you Mr. Lightfoot}

Craggy face
lithesome grace
on strings of
marionette

still had a dance
a song, a prance
and wow
could he still sing

cool cool kids
and white-haired folk
gave a listen
teared and choked

pulled out of
musician's bag
songs of note
that he wrote

transported me
back to '63
when I fell in love
with him

it was then
that he embraced
guitar and strings
and touched my face

with his song
I belonged.


©Karilea Rilling Jungel
28 August 2000


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2000-08-28 10:30 PM


Sunshine,
Wake up, wake up, t'was but a dream. But a nice one. *L*

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2 posted 2000-08-29 09:02 AM


O but Sy, it was so, so good! Let me snuggle but wee bit longer, so I may hear the troubadour sing...
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3 posted 2000-08-29 09:16 AM


This was groovy, you hippy, you!!!  Lol and thanks for the smile this morn'!
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4 posted 2000-08-29 09:39 AM


LOL at you! Serenity! My folks had me so swaddled in naivety that being a hippie was the furthest thing from my mind! When I finally grew up...it was 1980! But the music does stay with one, doesn't it!
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5 posted 2000-08-29 10:36 AM


Sunshine, I found this very soothing, relaxing and romantic.  Loved it as always.  Have a great day!  Lots of smile your way.
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6 posted 2000-08-29 11:17 AM


Susan...a kind reply! Thanks for the twinkle!
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7 posted 2000-08-29 12:34 PM


Amazing how certain singers can do that to us....and Gordon is certainly one of them. Very nice, Sunshine  
Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2000-08-29 12:51 PM


Magical night it must have been.  His lingering voice as he breaks out in one of his ballads has a sort of mystical haunting to it that beckons one to live his words within their souls.  Excellent write my friend.
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9 posted 2000-08-29 01:40 PM


Yes, 'Deer...so right...and heaven help me, I thought of so many here at Passions while being swayed by the notes...

O my, Mark, you WERE there! I thought I saw you standing center stage! [Yes, you're getting THAT good!]

Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 2000-08-30 06:00 AM


lovely, lovely...

regards,
sudhir

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11 posted 2000-08-30 07:14 AM


Sudhir, lovely, and FUN...thought of so many of you, who would have enjoyed the poetry of his words in song...great stuff...
sonjes
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12 posted 2000-08-30 08:18 AM


When I read this, I couldn't help but think of "The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald"
  I absolutely loved that song when I was a wee one...it always haunted me in a way, as only his voice has ever haunted me.
  Thanks for the memory and wonderful writing!  

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma


Kethry
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13 posted 2000-08-30 08:29 AM


Oh! Oh! Sunshine, the music in this soared.

Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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14 posted 2000-08-30 08:47 AM


Sonjes...the cook on the "Edmund Fitzgerald" has a daughter who resides here in my town...she had front-row center seats and a personal meeting with Mr. Lightfoot after the concert...I am glad you found this [see Anticipating Mr. Lightfoot if you've not already read it] and even happier that you enjoyed it...

Kethry, as it should...thank you!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 08-30-2000).]

iliana
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15 posted 2004-03-24 06:26 PM


I guess I got my answer by reading this one (the concert was great).  Beautiful, Karilea!
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16 posted 2004-03-24 06:29 PM


Yes, Jo, it was marvelous...and that's putting it mildly!  
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