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Kid Pedestal
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since 2000-01-04
Posts 26
Chandler, Arizona

0 posted 2000-08-28 02:04 AM



Somehow she captured the warmth and the beauty of spring and placed it in one soft kiss.

One kiss that hit me like a bolt of lightning from the sky, knocking me back and sending me into a void of happiness.

A place where the sun shines bright and the wind gently runs across your body teasing the hair on your neck, and sending it to attention.

And for this kiss, I can do no more than say Thank You, and return it with the warmth of my own.

© Copyright 2000 Adam Newberg - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-08-28 02:07 AM


Now thats a kiss
no one should miss..James

Kid Pedestal
Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 26
Chandler, Arizona
2 posted 2000-08-28 12:32 PM


=)
JnR4eva
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 377
Bronx, NY
3 posted 2000-08-28 12:44 PM


what a kiss indeed...i see your new to passions so let me say WELCOME TO PASSION'S FORUMS  
this place is great for letting your peotic talents run wild  .  looking forward to reading more.


"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- rlt



ladysixstring
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 374

4 posted 2000-08-28 12:52 PM


I wanted to tell you which lines were my favorite, but by the time I started cutting and pasting, well, I had the whole poem
recreated -  so I'll just say I loved it all... every word.    

-jaimie

Website: www.ladysixstring.com

Kid Pedestal
Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 26
Chandler, Arizona
5 posted 2000-08-28 06:01 PM


Thanks!

You all are great, and appreciate all the comments.

Kid Pedestal

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