Open Poetry #9 |
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For Brittany |
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Kid Pedestal Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 26Chandler, Arizona |
Somehow she captured the warmth and the beauty of spring and placed it in one soft kiss. One kiss that hit me like a bolt of lightning from the sky, knocking me back and sending me into a void of happiness. A place where the sun shines bright and the wind gently runs across your body teasing the hair on your neck, and sending it to attention. And for this kiss, I can do no more than say Thank You, and return it with the warmth of my own. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Now thats a kiss no one should miss..James |
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Kid Pedestal Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 26Chandler, Arizona |
=) |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
what a kiss indeed...i see your new to passions so let me say WELCOME TO PASSION'S FORUMS ![]() this place is great for letting your peotic talents run wild ![]() "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
I wanted to tell you which lines were my favorite, but by the time I started cutting and pasting, well, I had the whole poem recreated - so I'll just say I loved it all... every word. -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Kid Pedestal Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 26Chandler, Arizona |
Thanks! You all are great, and appreciate all the comments. Kid Pedestal |
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