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The siuation in my head
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The siuation in my head |
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Torn New Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 9Williamson |
Lying in my sweat drying my tears Waiting for you--I am Making me feel like I dont care I dont care! How can I feel if I cant breath? What we once had will never be again... This situation in my head Will it ever end? I cannot take it anymore! I really like what you can give me, But I dont know where I'm standing, not yet I really like that you can hear me, Why your not turning this around I'll never know! In time I'll be here Not waiting for you anymore I love you anyway, is that so rare? |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Wow... powerful words, my friend. I hope the situation in your head subsides soon!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Heartbreaking situation... written with much passion!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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