Open Poetry #9 |
No Doubt |
Poetry Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28Des Moines, IA |
No Doubt All I want is for him to want to be with me I hold him tight and try to make him see But he is too blind to all the emotions I feel inside And he doesn't understand all the tear I have cried He want me to pretend that there's nothing wrong But I can only take this pain for so long I try to ignore it and pretend it's not there But I love him so much and I truly care I would do anything to be able to call him my man But I don't think he will see I don't think he can Because he truly loves her and not me So I have to step back and let them be So I need to run I need to get out Because he'll be with her in the end I have NO DOUBT POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend? |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Emotionally powerful! Great job!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
It is really, really painful to step out of the picture. But that is the greatest love of all.....to let go, so the one you love can have their happiness. You did a splendid job on this, my friend! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
whew..this doesn't sound like a win win situation no matter what, princess...if real I can feel your despair ~~soft hugs and if not..well you made me feel it anyway Maureen |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
oooooooo...you have written those words so well and this is something that I can definitely relate to......NEVER play second fiddle....I just return mine when i am done... Just kidding,,,,but I loved the post.....take care... Julie :) |
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