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Autumn... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
End of summer's reign, Trees robed in short-lived splendor, Waiting winter's chill. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
time zips on by like that dont it yuh build it up and it gets taken right back down..good haiku let it bring rain to texas!!!! come on autumn!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Leaves changing color Signifying weather's change Nekkid winter trees ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Splendor suspended above dry and drowsy earth, autumn's canopy. Autumn, to me, has always been my most "inspired" time of year. Your lovely Haiku whets my appetite.  ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooh,...nice. Very nice! I'm happy. *Peace. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very nice Mike makes you think about Autumn and all the ways it leaves a chill, a whole new way. very nice poem. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely these words. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Mike... I was just telling myself that it felt chillier this morning, and the trees look as if they are putting on their golden coats! Great Haiku.... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
my fave season of the year Mike. Lovely haiku! ~Heather |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
nicely done mike..i can feel the chills right now...or maybe it's the air conditioning in this room? lol doesn't matter... great work "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank you all kindly for the replies... I would thank each of you individually.. but I am laughing too hard at Marge's nekkid trees... |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Leaves that swirl around Tumbling down from shiv'ring trees Autumn has now come. Elizabeth |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely! Denise |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
nice |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Just a Autumnal bump for this one. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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