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0 posted 2000-08-27 10:39 PM


Cataloguing Thoughts

Took some long moments
then hours, then days
to make things right
and put thoughts away

paper upon paper,
sheaf after sheaf
through each old memory
tender did leaf

saw many a soul
and many a soul mate's song
sung out in reverie
giving comfort to belong

divvied up into topics
then placed alphabetical
now each poem safely lies
among those ever symmetrical

reminisced over favored word
amazed at long lost thoughts
relived all of passion's verve
like cast away forget-me-nots

fingered tender written thoughts
and recollection be not forgot


©Karilea Rilling Jungel
27 August 2000



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1 posted 2000-08-27 10:42 PM


I enjoyed this line very much.
fingered tender written thoughts
and recollection be not forgot


Thank you sharing such wonderful thoughts.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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2 posted 2000-08-27 10:50 PM


Xeonox...anytime! Thank you...

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3 posted 2000-08-28 12:23 PM


As you may have deciphered- I too am working on the old catalog - I loved the way you managed to express my thoughts as well as your own


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4 posted 2000-08-28 04:41 AM


Excellent words...

Karilea,
This is fabulous thoughts penned in the most fantastic ways...

regards,
sudhir

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5 posted 2000-08-28 08:51 AM


Bill, Sudhir, thank you...and trust me, everyone should do it...you'll be amazed at your collection!
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