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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Soft Side Yesterday, my soft side was lonely aching, missing wondering, still missing thought touches nowhere quiet everywhere 'til whispers brushed my lips breezed me their kisses taunted my mind angst my body and then arrived dream roses... last night held them inhaled their scent felt their velvety softness as petal by petal placed them on my pillow surrounding my mind with tomorrow thoughts as sleep invaded drifted off to ~~sigh songs and the rhythm of hearts and the promise of today M *99 |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now that is the way to shine into a new day. lovely verse and I see it is one of yours from last year but You need to live by this today. It has healing powers written all over it.  |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
"Dream Roses" - wonderful! - sounds like a poem topic by itself |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Mo - This was from last year??? OK, Lady - now fill us in on what has happened sionce then, and it better be happy stuff, too! I like the imagery your prose invokes - you use line breaks very well to carry the import of each line. |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Alovely poem Mmoon |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Mark ...thank you...yes many poet friends on another site inspire me to write..sometimes in response to their loving words and sometimes just because they are who they are..this was one of those ~~soft smiles from my soft side Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Wil ...Maybe "Dream Roses" would be a nice new title.... ~~soft thoughts and hugs Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
LngJhnAg hmm let's see...where do I start... I felt alone and abandoned for many reasons the last year and a half...discovered poetry on the net..made many friends whose words comforted and inspired me and taught me to become someone I didn't know existed..desires and all...then the alcohol addiction for my other half continued to increase...then my sad poems..then...a little divorce discussion last week..and now maybe some relief...as to knowing I tried and couldn't do a thing to help him..and he wants out since he's tired of my wanting him to get help...that's about it I think..oh yes..he surprised me with one more thing this week...said he has a girlfriend now...a younger bar maid.. who woulda thunk ~~~~~sighhhhhhhh~~~~ ~~soft thoughts Mo(although I hate that, I will let you call me that..) ~~smiles MM |
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