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Without Music (Paula's challenge)
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Without Music (Paula's challenge) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Without Music (Paula's challenge) Each morning, I rise to the dawning of a new day and you... To feed you with an early morning breakfast, that shall tide you over 'til you are back in my arms again. A moment does not pass, without thoughts of your lips that cover mine with tenderness whenever we meet... The warm, softness though pressing your want, always fills my mind. The evening sun settling in reminds me of your hold and the moon rising sings to me, a tune of "never forgotten", as it continues to phase in and out of my life, yet is ever present. I fear the night when it's emptiness, on me unloads. I see the look in your eyes, the tender you show and I try to dance with you, but there's no music. Leaning in, touching you, I feel the humming of your heart, the soft and soothing of your voice. A melody forms within my own. I learn your song and when tomorrow comes will save this dance for you. MM 8*26*2k |
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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
"Leaning in, touching you, I feel the humming of your heart, the soft and soothing of your voice. A melody forms within my own. I learn your song and when tomorrow comes will save this dance for you." Breathtaking! *sigh* My better half being a songwriter, made me really appreciate this piece.  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Mo - This is really grand - I love the way you described the music, and no music. Such a wonderful way of describing a woman's love. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, accolades to you. Musically magic.Loved it to pieces. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Brandyn such a pretty name...and kind words to me, thank you ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
LngJhnAg gonna tease you now....I hate the nickname Mo..had an uncle named that of course with an e attached....sooooo you are in MD...I grew up there and still have family there I am on the MD/PA border...now... thank you for your response..*and you can call me Mo but I may not answer... nickname is Renee...all long e's... ~~softly smiling Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kethry ..thank you... this was an older poem with 3 new verses added to try and meet Paula's challenge of writing about love without using the word....hope it worked ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nicely done. Enjoyed very much. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Thank you Mike..happy to have you enjoy my words ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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