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In You I Found Love
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In You I Found Love |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I awaken to the sound of your breathing And the warmth of your body close to mine Memories of the night before flood my mind And my body trembles in response Your gentle touch and tender kisses arouse me Like no one ever has before The passion I see in your eyes Is there for me and it amazes me You want me, you want me And my heart sings with the joy of it This is the love I have searched for And I found it in you. |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
awww paula i hope this is a poem about you  i loved every word of this poem..the sweetness...the image that i got as one tells themselves within their hearts...truly romantic..let me starting remembering this now so i can say it my love  lol great poem paula i love this to death "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Indeed you heart does sing, it shows in your work! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I awaken to the sound of your breathing and your warm body next to mine." I breathe you in and we begin to make love one more time...James |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Paula, I hope you have this happiness It is a wonderful feeling isn't it?  rp25 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JnR4eva...you make me smile with your sweet reply..thank you so much EagleOne...And what a beautiful song...thank you James...I love your addition to my words...so tender...thank you sir. rp25...like no other feeling in the world...thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Lovely .... a little glitch in the system caused it to be thrown prematurely to the back pages .... glad I found it. Your thoughts are wonderfully felt. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very nice to see you have found what you deserve. Beautifully written. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very pretty poem Paula. Much aplause! jwesley |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
wow....I hope this is for real!! It is beautiful and sensual and I am dead jealous! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Paula, your poem is soooo pretty and warm...very much enjoyed! ...chanson~[This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 08-26-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
very beautiful words...soft and tender ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge...thank you for finding me LOL..yes such a warm lovely feeling this Mark...yes I have and its better than anything I have ever known. jwesley...thank you sir your applause is much appreciated English rose...yes very real and very wonderful thank you chanson...thank you I'm glad you were touched. Mmooonchild...as is my love...thank you |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula, my twin..... I feel your happiness in this, and I wish you all the joy that you deserve!! This is really beautiful and I must tell you that it fits into my life also.......we must be twins! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Well Sunny girl I have said right from the start we were LOL...thank you and I only hope you are as happy as I am |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Whew! Quite the feeling you are describing in this one! It's so difficult to effectively put into words the way a heart seems to tingle at the mere thought of the right person! I hope it lasts forever. Great Job! Trev. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Trew...I have missed you...thank you and I hope so too |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Paula Lovely poem with a beautiful ending I love soft and tender words, and I like the sincerity of this poem Liz |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Elizabeth...thank you, coming from you this is quite a compliment and I appreciate it. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Breathtakingly beautiful!! "I awaken to the sound of your breathing And the warmth of your body close to mine" The opening lines really set the stage for this one. -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Paula, Romantic, sensual, beautiful...it has it all...what a lovely awakening you've described here. I love it, my friend Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Pure beauty and grace Paula...you write with this feeling so very well~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ladysixstring...they set the stage for our whole life...thank you Michael...its a wonderful feeling and i am glad you could feel just a little of what I do...thanks Bdc...well its easy it write the feeling when you are living it...thank you |
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American Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-21
Posts 49USA |
Paula, Very sensual and full of love. I enjoyed it completely... American Princess It's only me, thinking out loud... |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~I have only ever dreamt of this kind of happiness....I wish you best..You are very lucky~ ~Cherie~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
American Princess...thank you I am glad you enjoyed this Beth...it feels like it has taken me a lifetime to get here...well I guess it has...so never give up...love is out there |
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