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Paula Finn
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missouri

0 posted 2000-08-26 02:18 AM


I awaken to the sound
   of your breathing
And the warmth of your
   body close to mine
Memories of the night
   before flood my mind
And my body trembles
   in response
Your gentle touch and
   tender kisses arouse me
Like no one ever has
   before
The passion I see
   in your eyes
Is there for me and
   it amazes me
You want me, you
   want me
And my heart sings
   with the joy of it
This is the love
   I have searched for
And I found it
   in you.

© Copyright 2000 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
JnR4eva
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since 2000-08-07
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Bronx, NY
1 posted 2000-08-26 03:09 AM


awww paula i hope this is a poem about you   i loved every word of this poem..the sweetness...the image that i got as one tells themselves within their hearts...truly romantic..let me starting remembering this now so i can say it my love   lol
great poem paula i love this to death  


"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- rlt



EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
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Between a laugh and a tear...
2 posted 2000-08-26 03:40 AM


Indeed you heart does sing, it shows in your work!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-08-26 07:12 AM


"I awaken to the sound of your breathing
and your warm body next to mine."
I breathe you in and we begin
to make love one more time...James

rosepetals25
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4 posted 2000-08-26 08:16 AM


Paula,

    I hope you have this happiness It is a wonderful feeling isn't it?  

                       rp25

Paula Finn
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5 posted 2000-08-25 06:38 PM


JnR4eva...you make me smile with your sweet reply..thank you so much

EagleOne...And what a beautiful song...thank you

James...I love your addition to my words...so tender...thank you sir.

rp25...like no other feeling in the world...thank you

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-08-26 05:08 PM


Paula~
Lovely ....
a little glitch in the system caused
it to be thrown prematurely to the
back pages .... glad I found it.

Your thoughts are wonderfully felt.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
7 posted 2000-08-26 05:54 PM


Very nice to see you have found what you deserve.  Beautifully written.
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
8 posted 2000-08-26 06:00 PM


Very pretty poem Paula. Much aplause!

jwesley

English Rose
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Berkshire, England
9 posted 2000-08-26 06:03 PM


wow....I hope this is for real!!   It is beautiful and sensual and I am dead jealous!
Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
10 posted 2000-08-26 07:48 PM


Paula, your poem is soooo pretty and warm...very much enjoyed!  ...chanson~

[This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 08-26-2000).]

MMoonchild
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11 posted 2000-08-26 07:52 PM


very beautiful words...soft and tender
~~soft smiles
Maureen

Paula Finn
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missouri
12 posted 2000-08-27 02:10 PM


Marge...thank you for finding me LOL..yes such a warm lovely feeling this

Mark...yes I have and its better than anything I have ever known.

jwesley...thank you sir your applause is much appreciated

English rose...yes very real and very wonderful thank you

chanson...thank you I'm glad you were touched.

Mmooonchild...as is my love...thank you

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
13 posted 2000-08-27 02:16 PM


Paula, my twin.....

     I feel your happiness in this, and I wish you all the joy that you deserve!! This is really beautiful and I must tell you that it fits into my life also.......we must be twins!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Paula Finn
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missouri
14 posted 2000-08-28 12:05 PM


Well Sunny girl I have said right from the start we were LOL...thank you and I only hope you are as happy as I am
Trew
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since 2000-06-10
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Ottawa, Canada
15 posted 2000-08-29 11:12 PM


Whew!  Quite the feeling you are describing in this one!  It's so difficult to effectively put into words the way a heart seems to tingle at the mere thought of the right person!  I hope it lasts forever.
Great Job!  
Trev.

Paula Finn
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missouri
16 posted 2000-08-31 04:28 AM


Trew...I have missed you...thank you and I hope so too
Elizabeth Santos
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17 posted 2000-08-31 04:54 AM


Paula
Lovely poem with a beautiful ending
I love soft and tender words, and I like the sincerity of this poem
Liz

Paula Finn
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missouri
18 posted 2000-08-31 12:33 PM


Elizabeth...thank you, coming from you this is quite a compliment and I appreciate it.
ladysixstring
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Posts 374

19 posted 2000-08-31 12:39 PM


Breathtakingly beautiful!!  "I awaken to the sound    of your breathing And the warmth of your    body close to mine"  The opening lines really set the stage for this one.  

-jaimie

Website: www.ladysixstring.com

Auguste
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By the sea
20 posted 2000-08-31 01:25 PM


Paula,

Romantic, sensual, beautiful...it has it all...what a lovely awakening you've described here.  I love it, my friend  

Michael


Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Butterflies_dont_cry
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Michigan
21 posted 2000-08-31 02:05 PM


Pure beauty and grace Paula...you write with this feeling so very well~
Paula Finn
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missouri
22 posted 2000-09-03 05:24 AM


ladysixstring...they set the stage for our whole life...thank you

Michael...its a wonderful feeling and i am glad you could feel just a little of what I do...thanks

Bdc...well its easy it write the feeling when you are living it...thank you

American Princess
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since 2000-08-21
Posts 49
USA
23 posted 2000-09-03 08:19 AM


Paula,
Very sensual and full of love. I enjoyed it completely...

American Princess




It's only me, thinking out loud...

Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
24 posted 2000-09-04 09:54 AM


~I have only ever dreamt of this kind of happiness....I wish you best..You are very lucky~

~Cherie~

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
25 posted 2000-09-04 01:37 PM


American Princess...thank you I am glad you enjoyed this

Beth...it feels like it has taken me a lifetime to get here...well I guess it has...so never give up...love is out there

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