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The bean stork
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The bean stork |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The bean stork A cow, or sow, or then for now A token of your hard earned day. Bartered away for tales somehow That turn and sour into gray. It makes no difference how the means What ever course the barter would. Perhaps the fancy of a dream A scheme, a ship of sail and wood. The epilogue is mostly why The trade is buried deep in scope. For sure it sprouts into the sky With end so high, it's lost in hope. It's true we see the ogres near Within the castles made of schemes. Those tumble down about our ears And buried with our best of dreams. We climb the magic stork to shrouds That show to us, as rainbow clouds. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love Sy's Fairy Tales... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ahh, Seymour, Jack and the Bean Stalk ain't got nothin on you! Corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You are a *L* Corinne, It's just my version, thank you for the read and comment. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, I'm a large nose? LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, I thought *L* means love. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
lovely poem, seymour... regards, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Thank you my friend. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A wonderfully mystical read Seymour! Visions of fantasy and reality intertwined ... much enjoyed these thoughts!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sy...just some typographical humor... like when I do this {~,^} and someone sees something other than a wink... always *L*, always! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, Thank you so much. Sunshine, Always *L*, Always. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, Loved the bean stalk (stork) play on words. Don't disillusion me by telling me it wasn't planned. Also liked the *L* interchange. I thought *L* stood for loser, (...with the shape of an L on her forehead - Smashmouth) knew I was wrong there but couldn't figure out what the *l* stood for anyway it made me laugh. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry, Enjoy your sense of humor Peace. |
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