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Revealing Sky
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Revealing Sky |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Just one glimpse, a Koi, serene, carp swims by, so swimmingly... splash and spark-- shocking--sweet--- trembled dance embraces heat... Light so mighty, sunlight shies. I close my eyes, revealing sky... [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 08-25-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
A refreshing breath...enjoyed. |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
as i read this for the third time i was taken aback by the beautiful scenery u had placed me in..very calm and tranquil...thank you very much, i appreciated it  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
What a gorgeous scene....truly beautiful words, I enjoyed this greatly! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I placed my eye towards the canopy - a diamond-studded sky a blanketed sea, wished a wish-- that I could fly amongst celestial forms and I was transported high woke up bleary-eyed what a dream! willed against will, shut the doors, eye-lids closed to their core, opened the skies in divine light. .... O serene one, You are inspirational, My regards, sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all, and sudhir, you are just downright charming...thank you for meditating with me on this! and now, for the flip side...oooh...but me is moody... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is just lovely, Serenity! Very beautiful! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beautiful, serenity! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
S'en, I'm gonna start calling you Transcendentia! You've come a long way, baby. Mike |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity...thank you for the beauty of this place of words... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Sista! What a serene and glowing picture you paint in this dark mind. Beautiful hon! Thanks Maree |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful my friend. . . I can see it in my mind. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Serenity, as refreshing as clean crisp mountain air, I can taste nature as I read your words. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thank you all much...and wish you a wish today upon a golden carp....and, yes, consider that a challenge--O I know that I would!!!!aaaaaaaaaaaHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! |
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