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Svens Challenge sorta -- She Really Straightened Me Out
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Svens Challenge sorta -- She Really Straightened Me Out |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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I reckon that I cottoned to her cause she was always clingin to me no matter what wrinkles came to be it was a scorchin kinda thing the way she wove her mystery into my very fiber pressing her heart into mine there were times it pricked me needled me into submission that nefarious cupids arrow threading its way into the very fabric of my dna straightened me out just like starch [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 08-24-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, this is good...{~,^} |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
no kidding......just love this.....almost makes me blush.....not sure why, but lol...I like it  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
..."a scorchin kinda thing" oh this is grand! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh yes this is a winner ... good one alright! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Reb, It's a winner but... Hope it gets through the censor. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
uh...Rebel...wow! don't know what else to say here, but wow! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Local Rebel, this one does indeed make it through the censor!! LOL  What a different view!! I really like this one. . . good job! --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Sunshine..... thanx... Claire -- sometimes ya get burned yanno... thanks.. ethome -- you're a faithful replier around here -- I appreciate the read and compliment kethry -- thanks much -- and thanks to the censors... lol dix -- spank you... spank you very much Sven -- glad I was able to rise to the occasion -- thanks for the challenge.. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
ooops forgot Corazon.... thanks |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
A very interesting take on the challenge. So enjoyed! ...chanson~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i'm really not a "material girl" but this poem has given me a whole new outlook on starch. you've sure ironed out any doubts i had in this thread, that you are a man who can knit words together in a tapestry, cleverly and with *style*!!! ~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a good apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
rofl@material girl.... thanks for the morning laugh Dor... glad you liked this one |
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