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0 posted 2000-08-24 11:46 AM


Weaving the Fabric of Romance. . .
[Sven’s challenge]

he does that…

he takes a forgotten word
a bitter-sweet memory

flings them out
the world to see

and it was all romantic then
and he makes me remember when…

he does that

takes a line
from the heart

does it with a
skillful art

and it was all romantic then
and he makes me remember when…

he does that

o he weaves a silken thread
through the memories of my head

and thus I have a fabric strong
that holds me tight where I belong…

and it was all romantic then
and he makes me remember when…

he does that…

23 August 2000
©Karilea Rilling Jungel



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1 posted 2000-08-24 12:16 PM



This is so beautiful...I love the way it flowed and moved with grace.....weaving a masterpiece with your poetry~

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2 posted 2000-08-24 12:18 PM


she does that

karilea...

she writes masterfully...

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3 posted 2000-08-24 12:19 PM


Thanks, little one...I don't know what it is in the water we've all been drinking lately, but cheers....
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4 posted 2000-08-24 12:19 PM


Why Reb...I'm blushing...thank you!
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5 posted 2000-08-24 02:03 PM


You do that Karilea,
You weave masterpieces for hungry readers like me to feast upon...
Thanks for your poetry...

regards,
sudhir

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6 posted 2000-08-24 02:05 PM


Sudhir, welcome to my feasting board...
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7 posted 2000-08-24 05:01 PM


A movable feast - you do that.
Keth


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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8 posted 2000-08-24 05:03 PM


Kethry, that puts me in awfully good company then, thank you much, pull up a chair, here's a napkin, I'll pour the wine...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

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9 posted 2000-08-24 09:51 PM


Karilea, my friend~
Oh, I like !
~*Marge*~


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10 posted 2000-08-24 09:57 PM


Karilea. . .
            you do that. . .

write with such a skill and beauty
that we can only sit back and wonder
where such inspired words come from. . .

ah, but we know. . .
they come from your heart. . .

Just wonderful my friend. . .  

-----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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11 posted 2000-08-24 09:58 PM


Hi Sunshine,

So wonderfully beautiful, and I love the flow as well,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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12 posted 2000-08-25 09:25 AM


Marge, Sven, Cerenity - Inspiration can only flow from challenges of the heart...so we all know who to REALLY thank! But I am glad to know that this met with your approval!...
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