Open Poetry #9 |
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Weaving the Fabric of Romance. . . [Sven's Challenge] |
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Sunshine
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Weaving the Fabric of Romance. . . [Sven’s challenge] he does that… he takes a forgotten word a bitter-sweet memory flings them out the world to see and it was all romantic then and he makes me remember when… he does that takes a line from the heart does it with a skillful art and it was all romantic then and he makes me remember when… he does that o he weaves a silken thread through the memories of my head and thus I have a fabric strong that holds me tight where I belong… and it was all romantic then and he makes me remember when… he does that… 23 August 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
![]() This is so beautiful...I love the way it flowed and moved with grace.....weaving a masterpiece with your poetry~ |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
she does that karilea... she writes masterfully... |
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Sunshine
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Thanks, little one...I don't know what it is in the water we've all been drinking lately, but cheers.... |
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Sunshine
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Why Reb...I'm blushing...thank you! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
You do that Karilea, You weave masterpieces for hungry readers like me to feast upon... Thanks for your poetry... regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Sudhir, welcome to my feasting board... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A movable feast - you do that. Keth "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunshine
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Kethry, that puts me in awfully good company then, thank you much, pull up a chair, here's a napkin, I'll pour the wine... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea, my friend~ Oh, I like ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Karilea. . . you do that. . . write with such a skill and beauty that we can only sit back and wonder where such inspired words come from. . . ah, but we know. . . they come from your heart. . . Just wonderful my friend. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunshine, So wonderfully beautiful, and I love the flow as well, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sunshine
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Marge, Sven, Cerenity - Inspiration can only flow from challenges of the heart...so we all know who to REALLY thank! But I am glad to know that this met with your approval!... |
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