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The Legacy of Spring (a haiku that explores the season of love)
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The Legacy of Spring (a haiku that explores the season of love) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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The Legacy of Spring spring's exuberance reflected in smiling eyes lost in thoughts of you just a little muse on the things that may contribute to the legend of spring.... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Prometheus... It takes a special poet to say such beautiful things is so few words......... Thank you for this! ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hey Haiku Legend!  I absolutley love this.simply beautiful |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I ditto Dark Angel on that... you have earned the reputation of a haiku legend with so many wonderful haikus... an art I have failed to comprehend... and all so wonderfully done... a true commendable job... regards to you Jamie, sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully said in so few words Jamie ... truly amazing! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful sir, but is it spring already?  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ I do so enjoy the way you make small words sing Indeed, joy of spring ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Sunny1-- Tis I who thank you; you say the nicest things! Maree- Sudhir---Thanks so much,,,( a legend eh?,,,hehe)You are both beautiful people who write beautiful poems. Thanks again. Kit- Thank you for the kindness you always show. PDV- Isn't it always spring in Venus' eyes?.. ---actually this is just part of a greater endeavour that will deal with the rites of spring... ( I myself was smitten in May of 81)...want to do some research??...lol) Marge-- do-ra-mi-so-----oops...wrong key..lol thanks so much,, you are sweet as usual. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jamie...your talent for this form is truly amazing never say never |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's such a nice tender poke in the eyes of the heart. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I loved this, so few words, so much said. I sat here, took a deep breath and could feel love. Thanks, |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ahh thankyou for that thought...spring just around the corner for me thank goodness Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Paula-- Thank you so much for the overestimation....lol Ethome-- Thanks-- it was meant to be tender Jenn E-- I am so glad I could add to your day--and welcome to passions tracie--- Thanks-- and I bet you can hardly wait. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, this is a beautiful senryu, I love it, it is now one of my favourites that I have ever read and I love how you compare Spring to love, I have always thought of spring as the perfect season for love as well! I look forward to more haikus and senryus by you Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
Oh darlin, isn't love grand? Hugs <**> |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Prometheus ... spring is not a legend ... as long as poems like this keep it alive well done |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Gee Thanks -- you guys make me blush Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
ahh...very true...spring and love go hand in hand together |
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