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Open Poetry #9

Ante up - Local Rebel's Challenge 1 on 1

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-08-23 07:48 AM

Roll the dice the game's begun
a kiss the prize for everyone
roll again, but don't shoot craps
keep your heart well under wraps
it's just a game so play to win
in here, there is no doubt or sin
certain sure, you roll again
can your heart now bear the strain
all is counting on one roll
win or lose, play on, or fold
passion's kiss first the prize
then the longing in his eyes
fluttering lashes, gasping breath
bold flirtation, a little death
keep playing on you're bound to win
then ante up … go home with him.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-08-23 11:40 AM

Love this Kethry, very easy to read and fun.
Catalinamoon

Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think.
Lord Byron

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

2 posted 2000-08-23 11:45 AM

very smooth kethry....

a kiss the prize for everyone....

*kiss*

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-08-23 11:46 AM

Girl this is great. You met the challenge well.
Juls

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2000-08-23 11:48 AM

Nicely done..."go home with him"...enjoyed the angst (how whatever) all the way through.

jwesley

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

5 posted 2000-08-23 12:24 PM

Smooth as silk...

Kethry, this was fabulous...

regards,
sudhir

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

6 posted 2000-08-23 12:32 PM

Kethry
Playing a kissing game you sly

you. Taking him home afterwards huh. Musta been a heck of a kiss.lol
This one was great. You surpassed the challenge with the kissing game. It made me want to play.lol
Again great poem.

Garfield

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