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I'll Take the Blame
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I'll Take the Blame |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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I was lieing beside you A million miles away I was thinking what I should do I was wondering what you'd say I was wishing we could work it out I was thinking you felt the same I was hoping I could figure it out Wishing we could end this game And it has been tearing us apart Bleeding, broken, empty hearts And it's been eating at us A ten year long crush And it wasn't your fault We can both take the blame We both know it could never be the same And I was dreaming of you Hoping I'd find the answers there I was wondering if you wanted to save it Take another shot at it But it came to mind That that isn't what I wanted Was just buying my time In another frame of mind Sorting through the angry words Spoken through anger yet very true And now I'm wondering what you will do Just sweep up the ashes Of a love that's died Pull the plug on all the tears you've cried And you know there's been many And it has been tearing us apart Bleeding, broken, empty hearts And it's been eating at us A ten year long crush And it wasn't your fault We can both take the blame We both know it could never be the same Baby I'll take the blame Cause you know it will never be the same And you can tell your friends it was my fault I know it will make you feel better And you can lose sleep over me In a pile of unfinished letters Words you'll never say to me Pages of love that once you believed And isn't it about time You found a new love? And isn't it about time You put away your boxing gloves We don't have to fight no more We'll both find what we've been searching for Cause it was tearing us apart Bleeding, broken, empty hearts And it was eating at us A ten year long crush And it wasn't your fault We can both take the blame We both know it could never be the same Julie :) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
a ten year long crush...wow thats a long one nice JulieAnn ~~softly Maureen |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you Maureen...It was a childish crush that turned into a childish marriage....But it says all I would want to say about it... Julie :) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
JulieAnn, it's funny isn't it? How these things get out of control? Makes you wonder. . . Excellent work. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
JulieAnn ... Very impressive writing ... could be put to music ...  |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~I liked this alot as I know the feeling of having that crush that takes control of you. Wishing sometimes you could end it but are so used to feeling that way it makes it hard. Great work here!~ |
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the romantic fanatic Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 26Spokane, WA U.S.A. |
not bad....actually I liked it. you have a style that's easy to read and I've enjoyed reading your stuff! again, not bad!!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi JulieAnn.... I liked this one a lot!!! I have a sneakey suspicion that there is a melody to go along with the lyrics here, and if not..... there should be!!! Great work, girl...... I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
JulieAnn, A story indeed that you have told. I don't see how it could have been done any better than what you have written. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Sven~~Thank you I am glad you liked it...and yes it is a winding twisting road we walk down every day.... Rex~~I was wishing I knew how to write music when I wrote this...Maybe I'll take a class for that,,,thanks for taking the time to read... Beth~~Confusing as it was I really have very few regrets...I am glad you liked it... TRF~~Tahnk you for hte kind reply....I will have top search for some of yours.... Sunny~~Thank you...and yes I sort have a melody to go with it in my head,,,,Like i said I need to take a class to learn to write music or maybe I could just buy a book... Bill~~You are too kind....Thank you for kind reply..... Julie :) |
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