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Drops of water
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courtney923 Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 43 |
Pleasure in sand, feelings afraid Drops of water, crying in vein Moving about, tring to be free Having no knowledge, of what is to be Swept away, by what you see Rolling the wind, beneath my feet Raise my head, to see the sun Melting in warmth, and brace my fear I've ran a long time, to get to here Nothing is like, what it appears A tainted vision, holding back the truth Where mind's escape, meets the land of fake All is possible, and all is safe My own little world, inside my head |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Courtney923.... I enjoyed the message of escape here!! Sometimes you need to create your 'own world inside your head' in order to be able to face reality later. Nice job, here!! < !signature--> ~~ To Live is to Give ~~ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a great entree, Courtney... I'm looking forward to reading more of your work - Welcome to Passions - Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Courtney, Imagination is a definately a useful form of escape. Welcome to Passions  rosepetals25 |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Melting in warmth, and brace my fear I've ran a long time, to get to here Nothing is like, what it appears A tainted vision, holding back the truth Where mind's escape, meets the land of fake All is possible, and all is safe My own little world, inside my head love it... ~~soft smiles and  Maureen |
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courtney923 Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 43 |
Thank you all. |
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