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Torn...He Is You Are
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Torn...He Is You Are |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This womans heart is torn in two One half belongs to him The other belongs to you How do I explain so that you can understand That the thing he gives to me Is something you never can You are the wind He is the sail You are the fire He is the hearth You are the storm He is the shelter And how do I tell him That without you I am incomplete A half empty wine glass a rose without a stem He is the anchor You are the ship He is the roots You are the tree He is the wave You are the moon I cannot say to you You are my only need I cannot say to him You are my only dream I can only say I love you...both You are the sea He is the shore He is the earth You are the sky You are... He is... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ This is magnificiently beautiful. You have crafted a lovely thing. Oh, the power of words ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Wow Paula...this has to be my favorite by you yet..I have to add it to my library....I have felt like this....once....or twice  oh well great writing here....  Julie :) |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Outstanding! I like this much!!  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
You have weaved together such beauty in this poem. I too am adding this poem of your's to my library. Thank you for sharing Coco |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*smiling*.... wow girl ....just WOW... by far my fav of yours... very cool poem Paula...VERY... I see you taking your poetry to a higher level with this one... which is also..very cool jm |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Oh my, Paula this is awesome! All I can say is Wow!!! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Wow! What a dilema!!!! I almost envy the person who could have two such consuming loves. Goosebumpy stuff!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yes it is by far your best piece yet. This one is one for the books. Well done. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This slipped right by me and I am so sorry it has taken me so long to reply but here goes.. Marge...thank you...you are always so generous in your praise. JulieAnn...thank you...and thank you for the honor of being in your library. ThUnDeRkYsS...thank you sir for your sweet words CocoBaci...you too honor this poet by adding my work to your library...thank you JM...thank you...friends like you words like yours...thats what keeps me writing EagleOne...wow is plenty lol...thank you English Rose...well its not a problem for me...I have but one love in my life, and he is all things to me. Mark...thank you...you know I value your words |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
wow paula...wow awesome writing! Tony |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
You have rendered me speechless. You have reached me deep within Paula. I can't even write so I will just say this was very heartfelt. Understanding Smiles Jenn E |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
so many feelings and yet, how can one's heart be torn in two?!? I, would give anything to say I don't know how you feel. But I do and I can tell you that your situation is not easy! (if it is yours to deal with) I hope you work things out...Keep your head up, things will straighten out with time! Always ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a HuG grows with a kIsS and ends with a TeAr?!?~*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Tony...thank you...two wows from you what a compliment Jenn E...you honor me with your speechlesssness...thank you Jessica...thank you for reading...I have to say this isnt my life...I have one love and he is all things to me. |
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