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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-21 09:23 PM


oOoo~~Just Right For Two~~ooOo

\ Lying back \
( surrounded here )
oOooOoOoOOOoooOOOooOoOo
oOo
..bubbles bubbles...OoO
OoOooo
..everywhere..ooOoOOoO
OOooOOoooOOooOoooOOOOOooOo

Thinking of
Dreaming, too
Wondering what
he would do
If he Could
Would he then?
Could he, Would he
want to spend
moments in
this tub for two
Would he, Should he
I'm asking you?
Thoughts escaping
Sighhhhinggggg now
Would I like that?
hmmmmmmmm AND HOW!
Another day
dreaming here
Sighing, sighing,
everywhere~~~~

M/M
*99

*just a light pick me up...from the past


© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2000-08-21 09:35 PM


Gads! With all those bubbles to play with, why does he need a tub for two?? (har-de-har-har)

Just kidding, neat, cute, diddy.

jwesley

jwesley
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2 posted 2000-08-21 09:35 PM


Gee, guess I hit enter twice...sorry (still enjoyed it thought)

[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 08-21-2000).]

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2000-08-21 09:50 PM


Oh Maureen...it's so good to see you back. Welcome, and many gentle smiles for you. And, I liked your poem.
MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-08-22 01:29 AM


jwesley
a tub for two and bubbles of many ..I see you responded twice must have had two on your mind..
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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5 posted 2000-08-22 01:32 AM


Bill
I am not really gone.. and this was a poem  a silly one when I was in a giddy mood once ..but thought I would bring a lightheartedness to mind tonight

thank you
~~soft hugs
Maureen

[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-22-2000).]

ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
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6 posted 2000-08-22 01:33 AM


What a fun, fast, playful poem    Excellent job.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

7 posted 2000-08-22 01:34 AM


Oh, this one is sooooooo cute!

You got me to smile reading this one Moonchild .. I luved it =)

Regards,
Coco

JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
8 posted 2000-08-22 02:37 AM


OOOOOooooOOOOO...very cute....loved this...i will never look at baths the same way again....

Julie :)



EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
9 posted 2000-08-22 03:13 AM


Delightful!  

P.S. Congrats on your 1000th, well done!

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



MMoonchild
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10 posted 2000-08-22 07:50 AM


ThUnDeRkYsS

thank you, You always leave me   and I enjoy seeing that  face of yours

{{hugs}}
M

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
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11 posted 2000-08-22 08:36 AM


What a bubbly little poem, almost Turkish delight.
Be well.
Keep smiling
Kethry< !signature-->

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-


[This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 08-22-2000).]

MMoonchild
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12 posted 2000-08-22 06:23 PM


Coco..well if you smiled then I smiled and I thank you for sharing smiles with me
~~softly
Maureen

MMoonchild
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13 posted 2000-08-22 08:43 PM


JulieAnn...thanks

I would take a bath  over a shower anyday or night
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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14 posted 2000-08-22 08:46 PM


EagleOne..thank you for the congrats and the delights

Kethry...glad you could enjoy...just needed to write a bubbly piece  for a change
~~soft smiles
Maureen

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