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I Can Feel
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I Can Feel |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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I Can Feel I can feel The misty touch Of white clouds I can feel The cool breeze On my warm skin I can feel The shine of the sun Kissing the earth I can feel The passion of your need In a simple stroke I can feel The warmth of your love Spread through my body I can feel The enlightenment of you Teaching me how To feel |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well done, my lady...nice, warm feelings here. (no pun intended) jwesley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
rosepetals, You describe your feelings very well. This was wonderful and soft. Very romantic. Nice writing.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Very nice!! "The warmth of your love Spread through my body" This piece was "warmth". -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
jwesley - Thank you again for your kind words Lone Wolf - I'm glad you liked it... thank you for the compliments. ladysixstring - Thanks for stopping to read. I'm happy you enjoyed it |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
And I can feel that this poem has touched me "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
JnR4eva - Aww I'm glad you liked it |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Such feeling. I really enjoyed it. |
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