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deb Junior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 44Reading, Pa., USA |
In my sanctuary I am God Creator and master of words, thoughts, reason, While you….. You are enslaved I am your master Control is no longer illusive Wishing you were free As You…… You probe my sanctuary In the corners of my space Light gives way to darkness Torched by fluent abstractions I feel it slipping away And you…….. You have intruded Stolen objectivism I choke on skepticism It is where I end and you begin Broken How can I exist without you? Now that I am outside [This message has been edited by deb (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
deb, I found this intriguing, dark and deep... but that's me trying to make sense out of myself... but thanks for povoking the chain of thoughts... regards, sudhir |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Intriguing is definately the word for this one. Great job!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Not quite sure if what I took from this was what you intended...but it read like a dialogue of the self...id speaks to shadow...a very interesting read. I like. |
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