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linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
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0 posted 2000-08-21 12:26 PM


Caged
*Linda M*


Bars of steel surround

Beating heart without a key

Locked from the inside


© Copyright 2000 Linda Munday - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-08-21 12:29 PM


ahhhh the things we do to protect ourselves.

Lovely but sad Haiku....it says so much.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2000-08-21 01:09 AM


very good...I relate
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-08-21 09:05 PM


I think my key got lost! Like this one Linda!  
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-08-22 06:39 AM


nice one...

regards,
sudhir

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2000-08-22 09:49 AM


building walls up high
never coming out again
away, the key's thrown

Good Haiku. Seem's everybodys doing it.
Be well
Kethry.


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
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Between a laugh and a tear...
6 posted 2000-08-23 04:10 AM


Powerful words.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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