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ddgoose
Member

since 2000-07-25

Posts 250
Baltimore, MD, USA

0 posted 2000-08-20 08:12 PM

       "DAYDREAMING"

As I sit in my kitchen, looking
  out at the sun so bright,
I can see the snow drifting, and shifting
  direction, and it's blowing forthright.

It is a very cold wintry day,
  so I snuggled in my blanket,
  and dreamt the time away.

Do you remember the things we would
  do, on a day like today?
Build a fire in the stove, or
  perhaps, plow all the snow away.

Maybe we would watch a good movie, or
football game,
  or bake lots of good stuff,
  Oh, on us for shame!

I can still smell the popcorn, cookies,
& hot beef stew,
but life is too short, and I only hope,
you can remember them too!

'didi'

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2000-08-20 09:45 PM

Hi 'didi',
I don't know how this gem made it almost all the way down to the end of the page without a reply. This is really sweet, and I have to commend you on a job well done. Keep writing, you do have a talent.

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

2 posted 2000-08-20 11:12 PM

wow.. this is heart felt. I love to daydream. thanks for the great read.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

One Who Understands
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 251
Cedar Rapids, Iowa

3 posted 2000-08-21 02:05 AM

Very very sweet

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2000-08-21 03:05 AM

Hey DD you have penned a very sad lonely but beautiful poem here. I can feel the yearning for a lost love throughout..good work!!

ddgoose
Member

since 2000-07-25

Posts 250
Baltimore, MD, USA

5 posted 2000-08-21 07:27 PM

To:  Bill - thank you for your kind comments.  I had a time tonight looking for it to reply (page 3).  There certainly alot of poets out there.

To:  Dawn:  I love daydreaming too.  Glad you stopped by.

To:  One Who Understands:  Thank you - please come again.

To:  Ethome:  Glad you liked my poem.  Thanks for your kind words.  Come on back now - you hear!

didi

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