Open Poetry #9 |
Write Some Poetry....Tribute to Janet Marie |
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Grab your pen from the stars call your muse from afar steal some time where you are write some poetry. Carve your heart on a breeze and you'll laugh while you're free long or short verses please write some poetry. At your desk on the net with your keys ready set sing the songs you like best while you're blessed by the best you can be. From your quill from your heart write the words that you are turn hatred to trust break your heart if you must share your tears only just write some poetry. You'll glow in the gloom like a harvest full moon shining life in a room and I can tell you'll get well write some poetry. You got taste you got spunk you got words for everyone In a dream or in truth full of love or just blue any way that you choose write some poetry. I had to write a poem about one of my favourites. She was one of the first poets I met at Passions and has been a great source of inspiration to me. Have a Vantastic day JM!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
You got taste you got spunk you got words for everyone In a dream or in truth full of love or just blue any way that you choose .... all this and more... ethome... and you have captured the essence of the BRILLIANT BRIGHT LIGHT AT PASSIONS very well.... regards, sudhir |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
ethome, You have captured Janet Marie's spirit. Now if we could only bottle it up and pass it around, the whole world would glow in the essence of her enthusiasm and inspiration. She is to me a great inspiration to keep going in times of trouble. I owe many of my poems to her. And your tribute is Janet Marie, Good job! Liz |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Sudhir I'm glad you feel that way! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
ethome my man- You do wonders with your pen and I KNOW she is gonna love you for it. She is all that you say and so much more as you very well know. Beautiful tribute poetic penMAN to a beautiful princess of our hearts. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Elizabeth those are very true and kind words. I glad for such a wonderful response! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you ethome!!! She is indeed one terrific poet lady...my sista! my heart. m'twin. We love ya lady. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
From your quill from your heart write the words that you are turn hatred to trust break your heart if you must share your tears only just write some poetry. You'll glow in the gloom like a harvest full moon shining life in a room and I can tell you'll get well write some poetry. ========================== My dear sweet E, baby... I wish you could see the smile you have put on my face and in my heart on this Sunday morn. I do so adore you for this... you know how much the gift of poetry means to me... and this one is so special as it tells me you know me well... and you know me from my poetry... the window on our souls.... thank you so much for allowing me to inspire you... YOU KNOW how I feel about your amazing poetry... and your friendship has come to mean just as much.... thank you SO MUCH for this sweet tribute and gesture... most of all thank you for touching me so deeply.... thank you also to my fellow poets whose generous comments here... brought tears and smiles to my face. I love you all here. thank you ELT jm Van the Man..for Ethome... your poem for me....gives me a brand new day in which to find inspiration.. thank you my special friend ... ~Brand New Day~ Van Morrison When all the dark clouds roll away And the sun begins to shine I see my freedom from across the way And it comes right in on time Well it shines so bright and it gives so much light And it comes from the sky above Makes me feel so free makes me feel like me And lights my life with love Chorus: And it seems like and it feels like And it seems like yes it feels like A brand new day, yeah A brand new day oh I was lost and double crossed With my hands behind my back I was longtime hurt and thrown in the dirt Shoved out on the railroad track I've been used, abused and so confused And I had nowhere to run But I stood and looked And my eyes got hooked On that beautiful morning sun Chorus And the sun shines down all on the ground Yeah and the grass is oh so green And my heart is still and I've got the will And I don't really feel so mean Here it comes, here it comes 0 here it comes right now And it comes right in on time Well it eases me and it pleases me And it satisfies my mind There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Mark I knew you felt the same way and I am so glad to read your comments. Thanks again! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Are you listening to Ethome Jan we want more, I know we are a demanding audience but just shows how special your words are. Ethome a beautiful tribute, it seems to be the week of tributes for poets, Jan on behalf of all of us please accept this crown Poetry Queen. well Eveagator may your pen forever flow. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Serenity thanks sweetheart for dropping in to make those fine comments I know how close you are to Janet. I was hoping to hear from you Janet. I know you can see how most agree with me on this and I thought it would be fitting to say some nice words about you as you are always so kind to others. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Brian I just know she will listen to you and the rest of us...we love to hear from her...thanks again! |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
How about... you grabbed my attention from afar with your opening lines... "Grab your pen from the stars call your muse from afar" I downright had fun reading this. -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Ladysixstring.... glad those opening words caught your attention...thanks for dropping in. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, delightful tribute and well deserved! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
OHHHHHHH Ethome...this is so beautiful...and yes I'm perhaps a little tiny bit biased...my sweet soul sister has that effect I see that she touches your heart and inspires you as well...a true butterfly of poetry...yes she is Great writing!! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ethome--what a wonderful heart-felt tribute to a beautiful lady...she inspires me with the open lovliness of her trueness in writing and in her deep impassioned love that shows in her poetry and all her replies... thank you for writing this lovely tribute. |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
great tribute ethome... nicely done... and yea she's pretty cool huh? Tony |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Sunshine and Butterflies I know how much you both love Janet and I am so glad you dropped in for the read. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ethome, this was a wonderful piece to a very sweet and lovely poet. er... and lets not forget tease, friend, tease, gator-creator, tease, big heart... and did I mention tease. Parker |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks so much Tony yeah you're right very nice lady...thanks again for reading! Thank you Parker..yes I think you did mention tease...yes it seems to me you did..you know she'll love you for it. Ha ha just wait! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Martie I almost missed you in my replies and that would'nt be fair thanks so much...take care ethome |
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