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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Sundown Driving along the endless band of tar White markers flying by like thoughts In front of me, the Sun so clear descending Trees way ahead look like they were on fire Upon this view of beauty, I send my thoughts to you Across the land across the seven seas The straight and narrow road leis silent ahead of me Clear the sky no cloud no haze A thought crossed my mind A thought of peace and calm If I have to go some day I would like to go like the dying Sun Leaving a warm feeling in ones heart Forever more The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh my this is beautiful. The images it brought to mind were lovely. Juls |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hello, sweetheart~ So VERY good to see you !  I already give thought to you when the moon if full in the sky ... now this lovely thought will be with me as I watch the setting sun ....... 'If I have to go some day I would like to go like the dying Sun Leaving a warm feeling in ones heart Forever more' Simply a stunning feeling, dear one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Helmut...I've missed you...so glad to see you here with this beautiful poem! [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We've all missed you! Welcome home! {~,^} (You knew I wouldn't miss THIS one!)  [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 08-19-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Helmut, I didn't realize you had posted this here, but am pleased to see that you did. You know I love it. L. and S. P. ((((you)))) Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
A Rose for each of you I will give A Thank you small, but from my heart I Thank you all for your reply I hope I be your friend for yet another while The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How lovely!!! Great job, Helmut! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I can only say...my God this is absolutely beautiful!!!! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I thank you both for your kind words about the poem. It comes from the heart and I'm glad that it is received that way. Thank you, once more. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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