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Blue Horizon
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Blue Horizon |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
She cries the blue horizon from a northern light she makes, suprised by this admission of feelings in her this eve, for a call from a distance that tore into her soul, the lack of compassion that she herself questions now. Her only safe haven is to lock away her heart to attempt lacinate her feelings and deal them apart, the suprise of all is her inner house of care that screams to be free and remove the torment there. She cries the blue horizon to which her beauty comes away the taste of small freedoms which do frighten her this day, to hear her tears attack the solice she maintains the slight opening of her heart and the freedom she will gain. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~"She cries the blue horizon",...what a line! Michael,...this poem, your words, *sigh*! The ending is perfect. Thank you for a most touching and enjoyable read. Please take care. *Peace. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
This is very very nice... I had to read it twice... "She cries the blue horizon" what a fabulous line. I'd love to see those words captured in a painting. -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She cries the blue horizon to which her beauty comes away the taste of small freedoms which do frighten her this day, to hear her tears attack the solice she maintains the slight opening of her heart and the freedom she will gain. ====================== he stares out at the blue horizon ... in the distance he hears her cries. he then offers her quiet comfort ... this gift of his poetic lullabys. ******* so beautiful Michael ... so ... you.  jm |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Michael, so so lovely. I too read it twice. Well done. Juls |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This was great to read, very nice. Thanks for sharing it with us  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Michael, I had to reread this several times. This poem has touched me deeply. I can so easily relate to this. Your pen is very wise, and your heart is one in a million. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Michael* I wish I had the words to tell you how much this poem touched my heart... but this is one of the times that the word "amazing" will have to say it all~ |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I am so touched and honored by each of you who have read this, it truely means the world to me....thankyou |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This is far too good to sit on a back page. So back to the top!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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