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What You Could See
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What You Could See |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
If you close your eyes You could imagine many things You could imagine heavenly bliss Or when a songbird sings. If you closed your eyes And imagined something romantic You could imagine you and your mate Cruising across the Atlantic. You could also close your eyes And open up to nightmares Ghastly things & thoughts in your mind Despicable, hideous beast chasing you everywhere. But if you closed your eyes And savored your dreams You could enter into something erotic Full of sensual and sexual scenes. Only if you close your eyes, Oh, the many thing you could be. Your ever inventive imagination Creating anything you wished to see. So the next time you close your eyes And let your imagination run wild Let yourself drift away slowly And you'll awaken with a smile. Garfield |
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Poetry Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28Des Moines, IA |
I feel that poem is very truthful. If people would stop and close thier eyes and think of all the things they could do by just using thier imaginations for a moment the world would do so many wonder things. Great peom I started reading and couldn't stop. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Wow!! This is one of those poems that just... Wow!! and I know I want to say something but all that comes out is just... Wow!! No need to close my eyes... your words take me there just fine... Wow!!! -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Oh, and I almost forgot... Wow!!! -jaimie www.ladysixstring.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL...you dont know what you have unleashed...I have a very vivid imagination, and I love closing my eyes. Thanks for reminding us to dream |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Princess I appreciated your comments. Imagination spurs creativity. And if you keep reading here in Passions, I'm sure you'll see that our world has created so many beautiful things already, and there will be many more. Ladysixstring As always, I appreciate your comments. I'm always looking forward to your work. You are truly a very imaginative person. Thanks again. Paula When you drop by and comment on one of my poems, just you being able to take a moment to comment, I take as a compliment. Your vivid imagination and not knowing what I've unleashed has got me looking forward to your next work. Hopefully it will be here on Open Poetry #9 if you know what I mean. Garfield |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A wonderful journey within your words...dreams...the only free trip you can take to anywhere your heart desires. Great work~ |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Butterfly Thanks for your wonderful comment. I glad I could take you on a short journey. Your welcome to travel with me anytime. Thanks again. Garfield |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And of late I usually do wake up with a smile....my problem is the getting to sleep part.LOl....wonderful verse. Great reading. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GGRN~ Yep ! I can see it now ... !  Good write, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
the epitome of a dreamer's poem. I enjoyed this much, thank you for sharing "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I loved this Garfield , the mind is very perceptive and deceptive. It makes our fantasies and realities. I enjoyed this very much. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED YOUR READ!!!!!! |
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