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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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So this is me. It's how I am. No one ever understands. I have always been this way... and always this way I will stay. Avoid the think Avoid the cry, flip the page that screams of "why".... "Patterns?" He is unconvinced. And wonders at coincidence. In a rage, he swiped at fly... and in dismay, the white dove flies... a lesson to remember... cry... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I try.~ Now I cry. S,...this one has reached me. Please accept my huggy. Take care of you. *Peace. *Ok,...huggy??? What's up with that? How 'bout hug? Could never tell I work with children could ya!?! [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 08-18-2000).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
sensitivity - some men are a long time learning it - some never do - live with it - or leave may be your only choices - you touched me with this - heard you loud and clear |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hi there.... just a 'toddlin' meself along... Spitfire---somehow I knew you would understand...warm heart hugs....thank you... and Wilfred--that was such a lovely! I thank you much me friend! |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
What a wonderful poem... yet sad. May peace find your heart, and stay forever more. "The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Tenderly read and understood ... We are all privy to our tears ... when they fall for someone we love ... someone we've hurt ... someone we've lost ... or most often ... for ourselves ! *Hugs from here ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
my friend. . . I know the tears you cry. . . simply you. . . ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So this is me. It's how I am. No one ever understands. I have always been this way... and always this way I will stay. ==================== i understand ... from a place so deep it only sees light cast by poetry. cry, baby...they cant have our tears.. or our poetry... "this is what it sounds like ...when doves cry." love you s'en... me |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Serenity, you have said so much in so few words here. What you are should be enough for any man  |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Serenity I agree with Balladeer. Remain strong and continue to express yourself through such exceptional writing. Garfield |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to me friends for the heartwarming replies...and Michael, for that one comment alone--well, let's just say nobody better mess with me Balladeer!!! Hugs to you all. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Oh girl......your tears are all over this poem....the ones from your heart not your eyes...**angel wing hugs** to you...for they ask nothing in return. Beautifully expressed and heartfelt~ |
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