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When a Woman falls in love....
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When a Woman falls in love.... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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When a woman falls in love, She sees the world a different way... And all things rise above forgotten dreams of yesterday... The sun shines down upon her face, as fresh as morning dew... Emerald eyes begin to shine, Each time she thinks of you... It doesn't matter what her age, A woman always knows... It starts with a giddy-feeling stage, From there it only grows... It sometimes happens overnight, A thing she can't control... She thinks of you and she can't fight the longing in her soul... You may be quite within her reach, Or far across the land... You might be free and single or a very married man... She may be locked up in a cage that hasn't any door... But that just doesn't matter, She is falling more and more... The situation looks, at best, like some bad fairy tale... The only contact life allows is through electric mail... But she knows fate can bring two lovers that which they desire... And all that time apart will only add fuel to the fire... There will one day be a place where eyes and lips can meet... And all the waiting time between will make it much more sweet... And when at last your love is joined, complete throughout all time... Then you'll look back and read this love she gave to you.. in rhyme... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very Well writtin Sunny1. I loved the flow of the this poem. Rich |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Rich.... Thank you for your reply, and I'm really glad you liked this one. It kindof wrote itself, and those are the ones that I like!! Nice to have a cooperative muse!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
WOW!! Sunny, this was incredible and one of the best of yours I've ever read. I loved the flow, as well as the content. Excellent! Michael |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Aww Sunny,...good one. And true as well...adding fuel and making it all the better when it does happen. Great. Take care. *Peace. |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
yes, I would have to agree with you, that time apart when falling in love is so special that when you do finnally meet, well watch out for the fire......... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Michael... Oh, I'm so glad you liked this!! I think a lot of couples get together after a long distance affair, and sometimes that just makes it better! Hi SpitFire... That fire gets awful hot sometimes.....gotta be careful!!! Thank you for coming by to read this one!! Hi Michael G... Yes, my sentiments exactly. Don't want to burn out in all that heat!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sunny you're letting out all the female emotions in this piece. If it was'nt for the love that women possess what would we men have to fall back on. I think this poem is entirely sweet and truthful....and you girls are really good at lovin your man so much so that we can't keep up sometimes. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Yes! 'Nuff said! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
ethome.... Don't worry......we'll slow down if we see you menfolk are falling behind!!! Thank you for reading, and I appreciate your reply!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sunshine..... Oh, Yeah......I'll take it!!! Thank you!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sunny you offer sweet Love that only embracing eyes can see...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You have given many of us an anthem to sing in our hearts. This is so very true in every word you say and it doesn't take a woman to know that. Your words flowed perfectly and grasped my heart with gentle tugs of anxiety. you have also given me much hope.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sigh....Sunny....You have certainly touched me with this one. You do write with gentleness and the tenderness that resides in your heart. My oh my, and 12 sighs, I bow my head in graciousness to you and this writing. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Sunny You write with such beauty and emotion. I really like it. Cannot wait for more. didi |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, this is me, and he, and you and he, and we are one and we are all together.. (that just sipped out ) Love this, printing this right now. Happy dreams my friend catalinamoon Words are things, and a small drop of ink, falling, like dew, upon a thought produces that which makes thousands, perhaps millions think. Lord Byron |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
James.. I really appreciate your lovely reply, and am so glad that you enjoyed my poem! Thank you! Mark.. If I have made you happier and with more hope today...I am very happy myself. Thank you for all the inspiration your work has given me! Bill.. If I can only come close to the tenderness you put in your words, then I will be better for it! Thank you, also... didi.. There's always more...I am looking forward to more from you! Thank you! catalinamoon.. Ah.....thank you!!! It sounds like you could add more to the poem, eh? I liked your reply!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wow, sunny!!! You said all the right things. Where do I apply to be the object of this poem?????  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
nicely done. enjoyed this very much. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderful poetry. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Balladeer.... Thanks for dropping by....as far as your question....I refuse to answer of grounds that it might incriminate me!!!!!!!! doreen.... Good to see you here!! I'm glad you liked this one! Thank you... Mike... Thank you, my friend..it is very appreciated.... < !signature--> Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-18-2000).] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Sunny, Flowed beautifully and I loved what it said. Great job! Marcy |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Marcy.... I thank you, and I'm also glad that you liked this. Long-distance love always seems to provide lots of emotions for writing!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
sometimes our eyes will see visions which cannot be the sun that shines so kind so often keeps us blind to things of here and now that shadows can avow in that light we mistake love for want of loves ache sometimes when our thoughts turn to love for which we yearn and to this end conspire a distant love to fire that we may be remiss in remembering this Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Jamie... You are always the perfect compliment to anything my heart wants to say! Never stop! This was a wonderful verse, and it is always so good to see your replies..I look forward to it.....thank you!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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