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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2000-08-17 02:36 AM

I wish
it was tomorrow
and again tomorrow,
I'll wish it was tomorrow
for tomorrows
chase away my today's

and in tomorrows
wishes grow,
like kisses under mistletoe,
and I'll wish my dreams
and this day's sorrow,
are kissed by prayers
of hope tomorrow

hope's of tomorrow
haunt my today's
for yesterday's wishes
came undone
falling to the dust
blown into tomorrow
upon today's wind

and as I watch the dawn of sun,
yesterdays have come undone
tomorrow but a moon away,
and all I have,
for all I pray,
is but the promise of today

I pace the
promise of today,
asking of the new moon
to chase tomorrows
dreams away

for what is time
but shift of tide,
sands that seep
grains of sigh
let me open my eyes wide
to greet this day,
to call it mine

so be it
call it yours
and yours alone
for my tomorrows
have come undone

tomorrow is not come undone,
proof is in this rising sun
and yesterday is history,
and just the ending of a day
what we have is treasure gold
a kingdom of a world today

my kingdom of today
crumbled to the ground
yesterday was treasure
tomorrow is history
the rising sun is the proof
that tomorrow is undone

tomorrow never was
a thing to be undone,
and yesterday is naught
but proof another day a battle won

Angel of Darkness &
serenity
Aug 2000

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2000-08-17 06:49 AM

...Serene One and the Angel of Darkness...

A blazingly glorious poem this...

You two have joined forces to come up with truimph... may your kingdom fourish...

regards,
sudhir.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-08-17 07:16 AM

DarkAngel~ and Serenity~

How lovely the dark and serene flow together.
Two talents ... beautifully melding ...
flowing into tomorrow.

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

3 posted 2000-08-17 05:36 PM

two yesterdays, todays and two-morrows.
very good premise and writing..enjoyed

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2000-08-17 08:10 PM

Wonderful! Ladies, you blended this poem nicely!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-08-17 08:15 PM

Amazing. . . simply amazing. . .

Dark Angel, serenity. . . ladies, this is just wonderful. . . such talent. . . together. . .

wonderful. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

6 posted 2000-08-17 08:28 PM

~I'm standing up here, I'm whistling and my roomate thinks I'm nutzzz! When I saw the two of you paired up out there in the topic column I knew it would be great. Thank you for a read so great. Wishing well. *Peace.

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