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Wonderment Rambling....
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Wonderment Rambling.... |
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Sunshine
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Wonderment Rambling….. in the haze, in the largess of wine when I would call you mine, all mine I would bring you gifts sublime in the haze, in the gift of wine when I would call you mine, all mine lessons learned in space of time would you know the sacrifice sublime, when I would call you mine, all mine I would bring you gifts sublime through this gauzy haze of time through this majesty of time and rhyme sounding like a Dr. Seuss' kind… no I do not nearly mind if I should sound like a Dr. Seuss rhyme because it is indeed the wine that to which I would enshrine and if you've followed this in kind know that you've escaped the time in which all words should hereto rhyme and to you, is majesty enshrined… ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 16 August 2000 |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is great stuff, Karilea! Loved that line about the largess of wine! Corinne |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A bow to you fair lady And a toast! This is indeed a rhyme most sublime As is its poet. . . Well done my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, What ever your drinking send me some. *L* |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Corinne, Sven, tonight, I wander... thank you both for reading... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, you peeked in...Cabernet Sauvignone, my friend...[and believe me, we still need spell-check here...] can you get it local, or do I need to ship? |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's a wonderful format, sunshine, and you've used it well. Beautiful..... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Balladeer... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey the world always needs a little Sunshine and a nice calming wine ramble....and a breakfast of green eggs and ham...and it gets you on your way to a ramble divine...I loved this one! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Geez ethome, did you have to mention green eggs and ham???? Thanks! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I believe it is spelled as Cabernet Sauvignon and pronounced as Kaberney Sowinyon... an excellent choice by an excellent poet and an excellent person... regards Karilea, Sudhir P.S. u cud pozziblee kall dhis az eggzellant alzo  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Yes, Sudhir, apparently the "e" slipped in on me...and thank you! |
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