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Dawn of Acceptance
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Dawn of Acceptance |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
One moments bliss Becomes my heart transparent Secrets shared of this Are all to long apparent. What mocks me angel? Is it my love forsaken Or the loneliness I've kept That weeps, my soul taken. Not the shadow that comes From moon lit nights comfort Cover my eyes, softly And bring me solice. That my journey just begins What with, my endurance Through tears that sting my eyes And the heart tugs my effort. A promise to continue For that I shall go, But my mind will not wonder Not far from her soul. She comforts me still Though sifferent now, not quite My love still strong Does she feel this, how she might. Strongest of emotions beat The blood is strong in me And dawn comes thee, awaken Your love still in me beating. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Michael G..... "Your love still in me beating"....such a beautiful line, full of emotion....You write with a tender touch, and it settles gently on the reader's soul! This was lovely! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
"For that I shall go, But my mind will not wonder Not far from her soul. She comforts me still" I enjoyed this poem.... I love the bit captured above. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
That my journey just begins What with, my endurance Through tears that sting my eyes And the heart tugs my effort. A promise to continue For that I shall go, But my mind will not wonder Not far from her soul. She comforts me still Though sifferent now, not quite My love still strong Does she feel this, how she might. Strongest of emotions beat The blood is strong in me And dawn comes thee, awaken Your love still in me beating. ========================= it is those traces left behind that help our hearts heal ... somethings never leave us ... but those memories become wind in our wings and help to set us free ... this is a very special poem Michael, but then thats not surprising, as so is the poet take care jm I want to share something with you... Traces .... http://netpoets.com/cgi/pip/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=34&topic=000246 There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Janet said it all so well my friend and ( I know .......I was surprised too!!!!) LOL And she does indeed say it in one of my personal favourites of hers........her Traces left Behind. You will see the light of new day Michael.......I know you will. Cause if you don't......I kill ya!!! LOL  < !signature-->It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 08-17-2000).] |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I can not begin to tell you how your words made me feel. I love your poems very much they often put a sparkle in my day.. |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
"Dawn of Acceptance" Your poem depicts a person struggling to deal with emotions. Namely, a lost love. Excellent title for this work of art. |
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