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Oh, How I Miss You Tonight
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Oh, How I Miss You Tonight |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Oh, How I Miss You Tonight ~*Marge Tindal*~ Oh, how I miss you and I long to kiss you Darling, where are you tonight ? Where are you weeping ? What dreams are you keeping ? Darling, where are you tonight ? Shadows recalling, your memory keeps falling soft on my pillow tonight. Where are you going and should I be knowing just where you are tonight ? If dreams can remember, then please surrender ... darling, come to me tonight. We'll waltz until morning then on sunbeams dawning, I'll release you again to the light. You'll be free to roam 'til my dreams bring you home ... Darling, where will you be tonight ? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Knight Dreams Junior Member
since 2000-08-16
Posts 46Austin, Texas |
Oh Romance has not escaped you Marge. You still have the talent to write on any subject no matter what it has been. Good to see you still posting and writing master works. Take care |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge* I love it when poetry touches my heart with the feather touch of love...this has done it!!! Beautifully penned with grace and style...as only you can do Sweet Marge~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KnightDreams~ Grinning big time here at seeing you in 'new' suit of armor - or is that armour ?  You're full of sweet mystery ! Yep, I keep plucking out these romantic notions that come to rest gently on my mind. ButterfliesDC~ I enjoy knowing that other heartstrings are plucked with my render ... you're a sweetie to let me know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Marge, this is lovely. I love the rhyme scheme you've used in this one |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Of love and lovely... Great work, Marge... regards, sudihr |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge...once again a treasure I find when I see your name...I am NEVER disappointed here |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
This is screaming to be set to music Marge....I can hear it even as I read. Simply lovely. Bonnie |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
OHHHH my dear Marge...you have given me a song to sing to one so dear...but alas...it must wait to be sung....Thank you so much...you are a true gift from heaven. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Thank ya', gal ! It's just me singing my little heart out ! Sudhir~ Thanks for stopping by for a read. Paula~ Oh, what a sweet thing to say. I appreciate it Bonnie~ Sing it, sugar ! That's exactly how it came to me. Thank you so much for letting me know you like it. MarkB~ It will keep until you're ready, sweetie ! Now come on, Cowboy ... 'Heaven' ? Quit making me laugh ! (I'm working and people will wonder what I'm up to.)  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky smooth thoughts...too bad we become disconnected from those we care for...and find ourselves missing them...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ Yeah ... it is that ! I like 'silky-smooth' ... sounds like a few fellas I've known in my time ! Thanks for the read, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge what a gem, an absolute delight, I love this poem.  You have such a sure and certain touch, beautifully written. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This is sweet Marge, the rhyme the expression in verse you've penned here I like it Hugz Coco |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ I am so glad you enjoyed it. It was a pleasure to sing it ! CocoBaci~ Hi, gal ! Glad you caught the rhythm - Sing it with me ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Marge this was beautiful... as are all the words I read of your's ~truely wonderful. If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Marge Get a large butterfly net and keep that dream near by. I'm glad I stopped by! didi |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tori~ Thank you for your comments. So good to see you. DD~ I'm glad you stopped by too ! Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw Marge there you go again with that beautiful romantic pen swirling long graceful letters of passion and love across a dreamy poetic page of reflections....excellent! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Yeah ... they sing to me and I am alive with song ! How nicely you phrase your praise ! I appreciate you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--In my mind he is with you, certainly in your heart and in the romance of your beautiful poetry. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Why, Margie, I'm right here with you. Just look around. I'm in full view. I'm in the moon above your head... I'm in the pillow on your bed. I'm in the sheets that cover you And on the ceiling over you. I'm in the sounds of whipporwill I'm moonbeams on your window sill. I am the dreams you'll have tonight I am the ray of dawn's first light. So where am I? I'll tell you true I am right here, surrounding you.... |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Marge Boy!!! You've got to be proud of this one. Garfield |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Yeah .... I think you're right. Thanks, my friend. 'I'm in the sounds of whipporwill I'm moonbeams on your window sill. I am the dreams you'll have tonight I am the ray of dawn's first light. So where am I? I'll tell you true I am right here, surrounding you....' ~*~ You charm me with the phrases that fall upon my heart. Surrounded by the knowledge that we'll never part ... I sleep in sweet surrender knowing when night is through ... I'll see the sun tomorrow in the rapture that is you. *Sighing deeply here .... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GGRN~ Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. I'm always pleased with what I can share with others. Welcome to Passions. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
You've expressed your feeling very well, Marge. This piece has such softness to it plus it's sad too. Wonderful job and God bless Marge pen! Nathan |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Lovely versing... A silver tongued woman... be still my heart... wonderful poem. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is wonderful Marge! Excellent!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate, my friend~ Thank you for your comments and for the blessing. Mike~ I like your reply very much. Thank you. TennesseeAngel~ Glad you enjoyed it , Hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
what a wonderful fantasy! very lovely writing, ms. marge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~ Thanks .... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Boy that moon sure did a number on you the other night! LOL This is really lovely Marge. I did enjoy it. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh Marge... how many times have I asked myself that question. I have only my dreams... Deb BloomingRose |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ That big ole' moon threw my romantic heart for a loop ! I love the spin ! Glad you enjoyed it. BloomingRose~ Ahhh ! But the dream turns to reality - in time. Thank you for the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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