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This Magnolia Tree (Mark's challenge) Loving Genocide
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This Magnolia Tree (Mark's challenge) Loving Genocide |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Hidden from sight a Dryad could see from within this magnolia tree the sight of a person so strong and manly inspiring desire, from one such as she and vowed she would take this human so free while virgin white petals thrust out purity The sylvan nymph in leafy lace begged for a moment of sweltering disgrace so that, they two could find a place that no grand edict could erase and therein, they destroyed a race from caressing rays of warmth upon their face. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Wow what a take..I wish sometimes I could be a deeper writer but I think it's a deeper mind only that can do that..and well, mine just isn't deep enough (no pun intended on the well) ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, I'm not sure whether this is deep or just warped. Besides who would I use to ground me if you started writing esoteric stuff. Stay just the way you are. Be well Kethry  "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Awesoooooooommme creation Kethry. You have taken my simple little thought and turned it into one of not only depth but one of sheer beauty. The sylvan nymph in leafy lace What a tremendous line. You have earned a gold for sure. I bow humbly to your talent. |
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