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Easing Fears...challenge(Talking My Heart pt5)
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Easing Fears...challenge(Talking My Heart pt5) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Talking My Heart...Easing fears A Love Note...#5 Remembering, while silence reigns when first, we two, as strangers met. My eyes they teared, in want of you, my palms they cried in nervous sweat. Anxieties, we met head on, when softened lips, eased onto mine. The fears then left, we pressed, the more, forever, now our lives entwine. In me, you have my heart and soul. In you, I have, the "all" I need. These notes I've scribed on screen of blue, caress us each, with words to feed. If and when, the time will come that passions' ink won't hold it's weight, if purity of heart is lost, our fears won't rise, it's ease, our fate. Maureen 8*16*2k [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-16-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
In me, you have my heart and soul. In you, I have, the "all" I need. These notes I've scribed on screen of blue, caress us each, with words to feed. If and when, the time will come that passions' ink won't hold it's weight, if purity of heart is lost, our fears won't rise, it's ease, our fate. Once again you have met the challenge to receive your gold...you have brought to us 5 letters of love and shared your 1000th plus 1 with us and I for one am thankful. Your poems during this challenge have been superb and I commend you on your fine efforts. They were noticed and appreciated.  [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-16-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful and sweetly tender Maureen, just lovely! You've met the challenge well! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I missed the challange Maureen but I sure appreciate the beauty of this work you have penned here. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Maureen, This is absolutely lovely, as are all of the ones you pen. You are a master. Thanks for sharing this with me. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Mark ...that was so enticing...that I never went to bed last night and wrote all the challenge poems...I was in that kind of mood and you know..better to express while it's in you and ready to flow... thank you for the fun of that and I think they are 5 of some of the most touching and meaningful words I have written in a long while as they are meant to be from my heart to someone and the poets ink meant to representative all of us poets... ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kit ...thank you..I enjoyed writing them... E...you didn't miss it it's still here and I am sure you could join in it's Marks challenge to use his scraps (some word scraps huh) ~~he's a great collector of scraps and he can dump them on me any time ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bill ...your words whenever left for me bring a smile to my lips ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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