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If And When (Marks Challenge)
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If And When (Marks Challenge) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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If and when... You open your heart, Maybe we could have a start, If and when... You let your gaurd down, Loves door will be found, If and when... You come to me, needing me desperately, If and when.. Time will let you see, I am your heart,your sensitivity, If and when... When and If, Do any of the two make sense? Or words of dreams? Of hopes and desires? If and when... Are to me, the procrastinators'fuel for fire, If and when, don't belong in my book, I think it's time to take a second look!  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful way of turning the challenge with a twist....YOUR optimism on life and the way you choose to live are refreshing indeed. Step up and bow your head as a medallion of gold lace with the red white and blue is bestowed upon you. YOU shined with this one....now how about one more????? I KNOW that YOU can do it.  |
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jfilius Junior Member
since 2000-08-14
Posts 29 |
I dont care for the if and when much either! The here and nows are much better! This is truely anouther exelent piece of ART you have indulged me in. Keep up the great work! John |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I loved the way you turned if and when around so it bacame the answer. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Only you  .....this was superb!! Your personal twist on this gave the words new light~ |
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