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Talking My Heart (1000th + 1...miscounted)
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Talking My Heart (1000th + 1...miscounted) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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A Love Note... I offer you my morning eyes to gaze upon your blues. I offer you my softest pale, upon your own to use. Today shall be a birthday of my love, my heart, to share. It's yours today and every day, lit candles waiting there. The room in darkness, glows a flame it's wavering, slight breeze. I lay before you, nakedness, desires wanting ease. My thoughts, I draw with every breath inhaling yours as mine. I love you with each kiss I send, to you my valentine. I rise from deep inside myself the morning brings the sun. I've packed away the shaded grays for you, my special one. We'll trip around the world of us and travel, vacation style. I'm mapping out from head to toe, our miles to make us smile. Long time coming, togetherness what lies ahead is back. Just words of yours that kiss my lips, in loving shall not lack. We'll camp along the riverbanks and climb the mountain peaks. We'll hike the trails of nature's love no words, need ever speak. The air will fill with lover's myst and reign upon our hearts. As darkness grows and blankets us, we'll tent in body parts. When hour reaches midnight and the Moon's glow reaches full, two hearts as one shall race the night to covet each, it's pull. Completeness Reigns upon her Myst 'til golden rises blue. And once again, the dawning of Two hearts that speak "one true". ©MMoonchild 8*15*2k |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I LOVED THIS !!!!!!!! WOOOHOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ohh my, my, my, Maureen. You do have a way, you certainly do! The more I read, the more I like. This is fabulous, once again. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When hour reaches midnight and the Moon's glow reaches full, two hearts as one shall race the night to covet each, it's pull. Completeness Reigns upon her Myst 'til golden rises blue. And once again, the dawning of Two hearts that speak "one true". Superb way to celebrate your 1000th plus 1.....who cares about a miscount with a beauty like this....it is worth the extra post. Congrats and looking forward to your next 1000. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
WOW Maureen! Simply superb! Sensuous, passionate ... and the imagery, oh the imagery! Very nicely penned! And congratulations on 1000 posts!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Wonderful work.....congrats on 1000 and here's to 1000 more! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Jeffrey Carter WELL...thank you for the WOOOHOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! I think that is the first I have ever had... ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bill ..I usually don't work as hard on a poem as I did on this one hoping I could make it seem more special... thank you for all your kind words...they are always so appreciated ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Mark ...happy you picked those two verses I almost ended the poem before then ...and then thought I would add two more verses. thank you, ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kit ..thank you for the wishes...I was just glad to pass that 1000 and not worry about missing it by too many..I was busy responding and lost count..but I had the poem ready and waiting by early this evening thank you again for all your kind responses Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Butterflies_dont_cry thank you, and I don't know about that next 1000... ~~softly thinking Maureen |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ever so Wonderful Ever so Beautiful Ever so Images-filled And ever so pleasurable Such has been your poetry.... and your replies and 1000, then, appears to be just another number... can't help asking for many many more....  My congratulations and accolades on this mark attained... and as always looking forward for many more... regards to you Maureen, Sudhir |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sudhir too kind yor words..thank you ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen, this is so fantastic, the image is so well painted. This is what I mean by being in the company of you all I learn so much. Truly your words are stars, eternal and shining. Congrats on the 1000 + 1 a tribute to you.  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Marsha awwwww...I should have read this earlier when I wasn't so weak in heart...making me weep from such soft words..when Allan told me about this site(and I never knew Allan before) but when he did and I checked it out it exuded warmth and I have yet to be disappointed ~soft smiles of thanks for your kind words Maureen |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Maureen ... your poems flow so well ... they're wonderfully easy to read ... and this one gets the blood flowing 100,000 more now ... Get busy! |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Rex Allen ...a blood flowing poem.. made me smile first thing ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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Richard Brooks Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 17Richardson, TX |
You do inspire this novice to paint feelings with words. You do it so well. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh wow! this is Moonchild gold!! Man oh man if you don't stop making me fall in love with you my girlfriend is going to kill me.. Maureen this is one of your finest ever, I, just can't put it into the right words, I am flabergasted (is that a word teach?) I am going back now to read it again,,what a trip! I can only hope you miscount more often... take care.. ethome |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maureen--this is magical with vavoom and soft velvet touches...a beautiful sensory poem! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Maureen, I believe I have missed your 1000th post, if my memory reminds me I will hunt it down, congrads on 1001, an exceptional piece, beautiful. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Richard ..you are very nice to say that thank you ~~soft smile Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
You are funny E....made me smile tonight ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Martie thank you ~~soft velvety smiles to you M |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
brian ...this was my 1000th post or meant to be but I responded to someone just before and miscounted.. ~~smiles...you don't have to track the other down... Maureen |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Maureen! Just breathtaking! Denise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Maureen, First of all, congratulations on your 1000th post!!!!! Way to go!!!!!  Second, this was a wonderfully romantic and sweet poem. You have written from the heart I see. The best way to write what you really feel. Excellent writing. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Denise thanks for readingLone Wolf always, I write from the heart..the only way I know how ~~soft smiles and thank you M |
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