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Raspberry Tease ...Cerenity's Fruity Fun Challenge
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Raspberry Tease ...Cerenity's Fruity Fun Challenge |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Raspberry Tease~ I am raspberries ... growing wild thru the fence. I am that sweet temptation, for which you have no defense. I am both sweet and sour ... my fruits are both tangy and tart. Kissed with a dusting of sugar, I will steal your tongues heart. I am worth the thorns of my bush ... the fruits of your labor. As my juices run down your chin ... my nectar you shall savor. ~JM~   well what other fruit could I possibly pick...after all my confessions of the "effects" of Lipton Raspberry Iced Tea ... you can blame the tea for this poem  (hehe) thanks to Cerenity for the challenge and me twin serenity for the inspiration to try it, after I saw her cool apple poem... hey Mark...cheers sweets-- *clinking glasses* I told ya the stuff was addicting as poetry.. ~Nectar of the Gods~  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
 never have I felt so exposed to a fruit as I do now.LOL Chhheezzzz baby...did you have to make them sound that darn good. I know and you know the tea all too well and I proudly admit my addiction to it as well as it's biggest sponsor!LOL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"THE THORNS OF YOUR BUSH?" roflmfao...thank you, thank you, thanks a mil, for this delightful smile....I do love ya so.... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Oh my.....truly Hot poem here....whew |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow Janet Marie! Loved this! You met the challenge exceedingly well!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your juices running down my chin?......MEDIC!!!! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Janet Marie, You sweet little delight I am so stoked this is so wonderful and you are so right about the tea, and I might add that it is not bad with some Other things in it as well. Thank you so much for doing the challenge. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
[email protected] job JM...a challenge that had your name written alllll over it |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Ok you........BACK TO ADULT!!! This is HOT girl!!! Gem helped didn't she?? LOL Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Jan, yummy Raspberries... this poem certainly wet my palate and tickled my poetic taste senses. Thanks for the poetry meal it was delightful and delicious. In other words excellent poem. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
What a delicious poem  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
MMMMMM My mouth is all watery Reminds me of walking in the woods in Abitibi, Canada and picking wild sweet rasberries Wild sweet poem you have my dear! monique |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Hmm that is a side of you i have never read before jm, tea you say  ). Well it put a smile on my face thx.There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Loved the poem.Very sensual. Sorry I missed the challenge. I think it would have been fun. I would have written about pears I think, cause they're so like me. :P Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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