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Kiss Me Not Alone
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Kiss Me Not Alone |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Kiss Me Not Alone When your breath washes over me And covers me in kiss, I tremble at the want I feel, The overwhelming bliss. It takes me by surprising feel And fills my empty heart, When breathing in through every pore The heat of fires start. When you touch me in that special way You know, with tender view, Inside I melt, the winter's gone I've springtime thoughts of you. Of planting seeds into your mind Each morning damp with dew, To grow and bloom, to bear their fruit Of want, desire, anew. When singing songs to me, your voice Sweet sounds, I often hear, Of bluebirds, larks and little wrens Then flirting thoughts appear. I flutter like their wings in air My heart, it pulses strong, Waiting just to feel the trace Of kisses all night long. When your eyes look into mine And mirror what they see, Listen to the stillness felt, The glow released in me. Serenade desires held Untold, their hushed voice tone, Touch me with the breath of you And kiss me not alone. Maureen/Moonchild *2k [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"When your breath washes over me And covers me in kiss, I tremble at the want I feel The overwhelming bliss." Tenderly written...the first four lines say it all..James |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you james...you mean I didn't have to write the rest.......hmmmmmmmm will have to remember that next time ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen, that is so great. I think it's so tender and beautiful. Perfect! Well written, and beautifully expressed.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Maureen, This is beautiful and has touched me. I am printing it out, and will try to put this gem to music. May take awhile, but I will try. Wow, how touching! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
SImply put--very beautiful and sensuous |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Maureen You have outdone yourself this time girl. I can feel every word of it and its meaning. Keep writing! didi |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Marsha thank you so much for all your kind words ~~soft smiles Maureen guess what you got my 1000th and I was trying so hard to get it right ...my count was off  [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bill ..hmmmmm to music well sounds sweet to me thank you ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Mark thank you for the nice words, ~~soft smiling M |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
didi..I am glad you liked it  Maureen |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi Maureen, I'm so glad I found this one... You end my nightly read with plenty of smiles... Lovely poem Moonchild Dani |
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grandiloquent Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 104Midwest America |
Simple and elegant! The rhythm is splendid… charming, Moon. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Dani ...you surprised me by bringing this one forward..it too brings me smiles...thank you ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
grandiloquent thank you for reading and responding ...what a grand name you have.. ~~smiles Maureen |
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