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Amorist in REM
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Amorist in REM |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Amorist in REM Cologne trespasses into subconscious Images of fingertips on cheek Tracing outline of full mouth Fixated eyes consumes their lover Edging to threshold of seduction Numbed by sensual delights Lips mingling awaiting the dance The kiss of a thousand dreams Still echoes into waking hours Lingering in heart and soul The four am. fantasy Of my amorist in REM Marina Aug 15 2000 It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 08-15-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Marina some sensual lines you have written within.. "Edging to threshold of seduction Numbed by sensual delights." Oh yes these are lovely words...especially when acted upon. I know what amor or amour means but I had to look up amorist..a person much occupied with love and lovemaking...seems like a profession I would love to pursue...James |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
YES!! I love the verse you use and the sensuality of it as it flows, very well written indeed.......... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lips mingling awaiting the dance The kiss of a thousand dreams Still echoes into waking hours Lingering in heart and soul Lovely verse of tender seduction...you have raised the temp. a bit with your words today...and I swelter in desire now that I have read.  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Marina, a very sensual and beautiful poem. Delicate and tender. "Dreams they complicate my life (Dreams they complement my life)" Get Up- R.E.M "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James thank you for checking the Dictionary on that!!! I was going to post the meaning, then thought I would see what posts would come out of this!!! LOL  Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, thank you my friend. Yes, you are right, nothing better then the actual act! Michael, thank you very much. Your comments and compliment mean a great deal to me coming from one with such talent as yourself. Actaully I need to thank you twice.... Mark......swelltering desire??? Oh please...do tell!!!! LOL  Brian, thank you. You know I always enjoy one of your posts. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
AAHHEMM...and YOU said my raspberry poem need to take it to addy??? well come on then LOL hey girl...this is WAY COOL.. very sensual and kissed with anticipation and desire... very nice indeed... someone has inspired great things in you was it Gemini S hahahaha NOT LOL keep em coming gator girl jm |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina. . . Been dreaming again have we?? . . . in any case. . . this is an excellent poem. . . well written and very sleek. . . Superb. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Jan, now you know a lady never reveals her secrets!! Why don't we both head over to Addy and bring Gem too!! LOL Sven, I am always dreaming. Jus that some are better then others! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love that dream, cannot do any better. Beautiful poem. Very passionate. catalinamoon |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thank you Cat. These types of dreams are always my favourite!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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