Open Poetry #9 |
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Thoughts |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Sit in Silence and Listen Hard to the emotions from your heart Let your thoughts come from within Sit in Silence and begin Find the Truth in what you hear It's Your thoughts There's nothing to fear Listen hard to what you've said Collect your thoughts from inside your head Honesty and Truth can only be herd from so many of Your unspoken words |
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BreyerRose Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 55Easton, Pa USA |
Fee, Honestly, I like this piece. So many times we don't always say what we mean, for whatever reasons. Sometimes even, we're not sure how we feel about someone or something until we look inside ourselves and really examine our thought and feeling about it/them. Nicely put. Hugs and Kisses, Paula |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Words of wisdom - you've expressed yourself very well ![]() |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Fee.... So very thoughtful, this one, and I don't mean that as a pun, either! Sometimes it's hard to listen to our thoughts as we hear the truth and may not want to. But in any case...I always felt very grateful that we were designed in such a way as to not hear anyone else's thoughts! Very good writing, my friend! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovey sentiments Fee, and Welcome to Passions! I've often pondered many the same thoughts you've penned so insightfully here, very nicely done! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Fee, Welcome to Passions, it is a wonderful place, as you will see. Loved your work, just keep writing and I'll keep reading. |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Emotions don't exsist, they are just feelings. Nice thoughts in this one! |
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