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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-08-15 12:06 PM

My Heart aches at such a pace
I'll never let you go.
The clock strikes midnight
I must soon go home.

My heart races in time
as I think of the hours we
made love.
Such tingles went down my spine
You were so kind and gentle to me.

My mind goes to you
Even as I drive down the road
wanting to turn back and fall in your arms
The clock keeps ticking so I must go.

My soul yearns for you.
Soon I will be consumed by all of you.
Your body knows my body
Your lips know my every part

As I work today I will be dreaming of you
Your so gifted with your hands
the way they make me feel.
When I get home tonight I will
be wanting you again
Yet to be with you is for
a short while.
I couldn't live without you
For you are my light within my soul.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2000-08-15 01:24 AM

rosebud....

            I loved this one....it's
         happy, and sexy, and just makes
         you feel good to read!!!

               Thank you for this one!

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

2 posted 2000-08-15 01:27 AM

Sunny1 said it all, but I must add what a wonderful feeling it truly is to be so amazingly involved with someone. Oh the memories... lol More to come... I hope. lol

Nice job.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-08-15 03:04 AM

RoseBud~
A delightful read.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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notlikely2
Member

since 2000-06-16

Posts 308
UK

4 posted 2000-08-15 04:18 AM

Rosebud...if I didn't know better I would have thought you were thinking of me when you wrote this!!LOL!
Seroiusly though I thought this was so very well written and very touching....you are obviously very much in love!

Love is like the mumps.....the older you are, the harder it hits you!

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-08-15 11:24 AM

thx so much for replies. Love is ever consuming( a burning flame)

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2000-08-15 11:28 AM

Such loving tenderness spoken from the wealth of love....beautiful creation you share today.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

7 posted 2000-08-15 12:00 PM

thanks Mark I also enjoy reading your poems, words say so much of the inner soul. Sometimes I believe we don't know ourselves as well as we believe. In looking at my poetry sometimes I'm amazed when I go back and read, sometimes just depends on how I feel that day.

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