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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Sitting by the waterfront passing time away. Marveling in a moment that words can not portray. Swiftly across the moon, clouds softly sailing by. As moonbeam shadows are cast gently from the sky. Upon ripples of water the moon does a dance. Manifesting her beauty with much elegance. Swaying delicately to and fro. Mesmerized by the moon's halo. The shimmering reflections upon the water at night. Displays such an enchanting and glorious sight. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
*sighs* So peaceful and serene...I enjoyed this greatly.  *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ Well .... stars above, girl ! You've been moonstruck too ! A beautiful, beautiful read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you Alwye. The moon just has a way of making things so peaceful. Marge, well of course. You know me and the moon! Thank you so much. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
moonlight on the water...is there anything MORE lovely? maybe this write |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Thank you for taking me to such a beautiful place before bed. What an amazing picture you write.......ok, night night....I am taking this peaceful thought to bed, hope you don't mind.. Jenn E |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Paula, thank you and what a sweet thing to say. I'm honored that you took it with you. Hope you had a good nights sleep!  Thanks Jenn |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Shimmering Reflections - gets my vote - this scene is so serene - my cares swept away while sitting in a brightly lit PC desk. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thanks Wilfred. You know the magic of the moon will do that to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I think I have a new favorite of yours, Eloise! This is absolutely beautiful! Denise |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you Denise, I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah! Wondeful work Eloise... truly wonderful... regards, sudhir |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, I just loved this! I relate so well with nature and the beauty of it and any time someone can write a piece of work to get an even closer look at it, gets to my heart! Great work. Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Sudhir, thank you for stopping by. Your words always mean so much. Saunni, it looks like there are alot of us moon drawn people in here. Thanks for your kind words. |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Eloise While reading your work, I was swept away to a peaceful place. I liked this. Garfield |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you ggrn3 and welcome to Passions. |
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