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| Open Poetry #6 |
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The Board Game Of Our Lives |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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The Board Game Of Our Lives Where does one begin on the board game of our lives? Well, there's four sharp corners by which to identify, one of them is happiness designed in color yellow, another one is sadness designed in pale gray. Then there's devastation designed in color black, last but not least is hanging out designed in a purist of white. There's miscellaneous colored squares along the way with different opportunities and struggles to deal with. Some we choose and some come chosen for us. The objective of the board game of our lives is to reach the yellow sharp corner of happiness as many times as you can to reach a level of tranquility. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 02-25-2000).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Gloria, did I already mention to you I love this one ? I do !! I love this one !  |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
ah.... the white corner? now why didn't anyone explain this before??? I have spent much too much time in the black and the grey... must be time to roll the dice and moooove.... great poem  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Gloria I was hooked on this poem right from the title! I loved the way you expressed the "game" of life in this! Your talent shines through! AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so creatively brilliant!! Wonderful, Gloria!! Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Munda: Thank You very much, I'm glad you loved it. Corazon: Thank You, I think we all spend to much time on those two squares, you made me think with your reply that I should have ended the poem with: It's your turn. Aimster: Thank You very much. Denise Thank You kindly, This one was fun. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lost Dreamer, Your poem was a delight to read. and with your message I agreed. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Now I know what's wrong with me, I always pick black! At least now I know what to look for. Seriously, a very interesting perspective, Gloria. Wopnderful poem. Michael |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Seymour: Thank You for your kind compliments. Michael: Thank You,glad you liked it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
It's my turn ! It's my turn ! I wanna play !  Yahoo ! Thanks, Dreamer gal ! I love this ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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