Open Poetry #6 |
You Gazed Into My Eyes Tonight (Repost from # 5...something pretty for WhtDove) |
Denise
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You gazed into my eyes tonight I spied a glimmer of delight A smile filled with heaven's grace So swiftly spread across your face Alone we were, just you and me Enraptured in sweet reverie These times of ponder are the best By far more special than the rest I gazed into your eyes tonight You filled my soul with sheer delight You touched my hand and then my face A moment safe from time's erase Those eyes that will a future see Long after I shall cease to be Tonight have told me I am blessed They'll not forsake me when I rest They'll carry me long past this night Remembering long gone delight Recalling well this time and place When we were touched by heaven's grace And through your eyes I too will see Those future days still yet to be Long after I am laid to rest They'll sing for me that we were blessed. 01/10/2000 (For my grandson, Christian Michael, that little sweetie!) Denise |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Can tell this one is written with a gentle heart and talented soul...Beautiful, this is, Denise! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Denise thank you sweetie! I still find this spectacular! Uplifting and what a blessing! Those precious moments with little ones. Thank you for reposting this Denise! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Denise~ This was such an amazing and uplifting poem. This is the first piece I've read of yours. I really liked it. Time sure flies by so fast...so its important to spend as much time as we can with little ones. Your talent is shining through! Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this! *S* |
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Denise
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Thank you, January, Rebecca, Amy and Suthern! I'm glad you all liked it! Denise |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yes, this is so sweet and precious and pretty. Thanks for reposting. |
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Denise
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Thank you Martie! I'm glad you liked it! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You are right, this is very pretty...infact, beautiful is more the word I'd use |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Thank you, Ruth! I'm glad you think so! Denise |
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